All Comments on 'Breaking Day Ch. 02'

I've seen your work and you often finish on a pretty satisfiying note. The story inside is amazing, characters need a bit more work between them but as you said you intend to develop all of them, I feel that you needed to make larger chapters so you aren't confined to 2 pages of work, belive me when I say a larger canvas is needed for your amazing stories. Work on them, release them. I'll be reading.

I allways check to see if you have posted anything new. I want more from you but also I got bored from other works releasing so quick. MAKE us want more. I love this guy.

Well, I also am waiting for your next installment on this tale, really is a good start with so many roads open for you to take. Thank you for your time and effort in letting us enjoy your work...