All Comments on 'Breaking Lance Ch. 02'

Hello, I was anon giggling about the humour and thinking Ali G had broken into Literotica's ranks. I did think that the end of Ch1 might spell something different and so this chapter played out.

I'm a person of many moods - I loved Ch.1 (which I read as humourous, I have to say) but I also loved this chapter too - very intense and bringing someone near to their reality, something that they're not quite sure about?

Will be looking forward to the next chapter to see where you go with Vince and Lance (not Vernon..)

Except for his insolence and boasting, Lance reminds me a lot of Daniel in The New Slave.

The kid was initially taken and repeatedly beaten without his consent, no matter how much he eventually orgasmed. Then tying his hands behind his back and shoving him in a cage expecting him to sleep like that for the night is horrendously cruel, I don't care how badly he behaved. The kid was a virgin--and now we're suppoed to believe he's a submissive pain slut?

Not really into the whole thing, but would like to know what happens to Lance. A new beginning where he doesnt have to fear being without mamma and mean boyfriend? or what??

love it, made me hard as a rock, looking for more of it

I'm appreciating this story. So glad that silly boy's no longer acting like an idiot. And Vince? I think I'm in love. Lance is going to break so beautifully! I also like Rob and Nathan. So happy they're recording Lance's transformation. Very nice.

fuck i am crying for fucks sake.?

There seems to be some confusion in this piece, Lance and Vince swap roles at one point, and where the hell did Vernon come from?

Super hot, It makes me want to be a bottom and receive a good fucking too. Plz keep writing.