All Comments on 'Breaking Lance Ch. 03'

I like Lance under his bluster, and that Vince has a heart and doesn't punish him too hard.

While the wait is tantalizing, the stories make me desperate for more!

This is building wonderfully. I can see the beginnings of Lance's transformation, and I love Vince. So calm, cool, and collected. My heart hurts for him losing Anthony, and I'm happy he's found another boy to raise.

I found the 'hitting bottom' believable and painful. I also see that he is beginning to want to do what he's told. He just doesn't know how. He's simply never allowed himself to be parented. I feel for his mother.

I know what the loss of a father does to a boy. Leaves him lost, confused, and flailing in the wind. Vince is precisely what Lance needs. I'm loving this.

They need each other.

i wonder if my boyfriend would take that crap of me.? i doubt it. last time i chucked a cornetto at him i got pushed down a flight of stairs.? woke up with a broked leg. lol

From a woman's perspective I am loving this too, seeing Lance coming to terms with himself is enchanting, funny, sad but also refreshing. Vince is adorable and as a woman I would love a man like that too, but alas there is no such thing so good luck and can't wait to see this evolve

Fascinating how author slowly weaves a change in the boy becoming and enjoying being a submissive slave.

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