All Comments on 'Breaking the Fast'

The story brought me in and kept me enthralled. Superb.

M.C.

Very detailed story, truly sucked me in so to speak. Great writer so far, look forward to reading more in the future. Highly recommended to all. Anal has never been my thing but Vampladydi makes it sound sexy!

Very well done

A breakthrough in erotic writing. I am a long time reader of porn, I mean in the decades. This story needs to be read more than once: pure smut without let-up and in no way boring. For me, wall to wall sex in erotica, books stories or movies is simply boring, and quickly so.

Congrats, and many thanks.

imouse

Well written! So good that its like I have met the author and I understand every nuance of her story.

I loved it. Very well written. Just with it was me in the story!

I loved this story, it enticed me on multiple levels with descriptive and sensual wording of the encounter.

Had me in from the very first sentence

I'm still reeling from your other story! Now I've got more than one reason to seek the solitude of my room! Do you mind if I include your lovely face in my fantasies?

Not that I could help but...

I can see this happening, excactly like this. Nothing in this hot story seemed unbelievable where the reader enjoys it but deep has the knowledge it could never happen.

This wonderful story has everything and it's totally realistic. I saw myself easily in this and thats what makes it so erotic.