All Comments on 'Breaking The Seal'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

This was really well written and I really liked it five stars man

lovingeatingitalllovingeatingitallalmost 9 years ago
Excellent story!

Had me drinking in every drop of the sensuality between these two. Delicious and erotic! Thank you ;-P I think I;m in love with Katya,,, What a delightful creation she is,,,

peebudypeebudyalmost 9 years ago
awesome

what an awesome story. well written and very descriptive. it illustrated what a beautiful and intimate feeling it is to make love while covered in the warmth of your partner's piss. can't wait for more!

Rapier875Rapier875over 8 years ago
Great story !

You must write another chapter, this is too good to stop here !

Sucker4BoobiesSucker4Boobiesabout 8 years ago
Your vocabulary is sexy.

You have a great way to describe coitus, it's unreal. Great job!

Rapier875Rapier875over 7 years ago
Just Brilliant !

But it needs at least one more chapter to finish it properly.

And I love Katya's "accent".

Well worth 5 Stars !

cjm3rcl1n3cjm3rcl1n3over 6 years ago
Lovely story

Very well written. I'm envious of Peter. Keep up the great work!

BruceS1949BruceS1949about 1 month ago

I really loved your story!

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