All Comments on 'Breakthrough Pt. 01'

by shygeek

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goducks1goducks1over 5 years ago
5 stars

i like the tease, like the story. can't wait ti read the next chapter

LegallySaneLegallySaneover 3 years ago
What

a waste of time.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

The story just stops with no real ending. You or someone need to finish the story. Surely the son will become his mother's lover at least briefly before he begins exploring the real world.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

very poor

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