All Comments on 'Breakup Sex'

This is a terrible excuse for a story...Get a real life, write a real story, not garbage like this.

That's a bit of a harsh criticism. The story wasn't the best, but it had some good bits too it. The romantic in me loved it when she said 'I don't ever want you to stop fucking me'. I quoted that to my Master.

The bit that spoilt it for me was knowing they were college age kids - playing with the Dom/sub thing?!?! Although, who's to say you have to be older to be Dom/sub? The author showed their youth by putting the bit about picking the locks though!

Anyway, I think the author shows promise - so don't be downheartened - try again!

I'm 21, a college student, and could definitely relate to the chars. in this story. This is how young, overworked people are -- stressed, horny, and we find our pleasures where we can get them.

I personally grow tired of all the 40-something Dom/subs with gothic castle basement dungeons. This was a great read. Keep up the good work.