All Comments on 'Breast Suggestions Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Do the sister too!!!!

Have her bring her sister over...give her a dose...make her want to be like her older sister...and also...have the two of them in heat with one another..nipple rubbing...nursing each other's tits..eating each other...both of them giving head at the same time...screwing both of them deep and long..breeding their slits with loads of cum

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Great Story

Please continue with the story, maybe have her become a stripper and have family members become sex slaves.

mrddmanmrddmanabout 7 years agoAuthor
More cuming

Her sister appears in Chapter 6. Lots more seduction/teasing along the way. She surprised so many people with her careless dressing and willing attitude. Ha,ha!

IB_SmokinIB_Smokinalmost 7 years ago

Can't wait to read the next installment

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Lucky him.

I don't think I met her when I was a teen.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
VERY GOOD but room for improvement

I enjoyed the story very much for excellent descriptions and good premise. But often the same phrases tend to get repeated which detracted from the overall story. But still looking forward to chapter 2 - thank you

mrddmanmrddmanalmost 7 years agoAuthor
Thanks for commenting!

Not sure I should continue the series. Not sure I have many readers? I'm told I need more direction. Trying to bring back an internal dilemma in each of them, and also a very slutty, seductive side to each of them. Hard to do!

I wrote this cause I was tired of people saying she has big tits and then ignoring them and focusing on sex scenes or blowjobs. About time that tits and nipples seduced us and rose to the tippy top!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Great descriptions of an outrageously slim and stacked heroine. All your chapters are good but imo this one is still the best, probably because it portrays her becoming aware of her sexuality and eagerness to learn.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

One of the best I've ever read on this site.

You have outstanding descriptive abilities

Subsequent chapters not quite as good but still excellent.

I think the innocence awakened and corroborating use of scientific terms like "semen" and "sperm" was a perfect choice for this chapter. Would like to read more of that combination if you're so inclined.

Wood_Wood_over 3 years ago
Love it

I'm a breast man myself, and by man, I mean maniac. I love your descriptions of her outfits and how they flatter the breasts, the sexy dialogues, the dirty talk, the nipple play. I love when girl's pussies are connected to their nipples and get wet from playing with the boobs. I love that he has plans to bring her out in public and expose her sex appeal by making her wear sexy and revealing clothes, especially with no underwear. Sounds like something I would do more often with the wife if we could travel to cities far away more often..... very, VERY hot, your stories are making me rock hard mmmm

shysuzyshysuzyover 3 years ago
What a horny story

I love this story - making me really horny. I long for someone to treat my breasts like that, twisting and pulling my nipples until they are so long and hard. Trying to resist touching myself until I've read at least one more chapter.

UncleFester623UncleFester62319 days ago

Love the slow burn start to this one!

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