by DamienDeath20
I just want to preface this by saying I never comment on pretty much any firm of media I consume, but I wanted to say that you are fast becoming one of my fav authors on here? Your stories play on pretty much my exact kinks, it's awesome. As for this story I say do 2 chapters per boy so that we get the sense of familiarity and we get variety at tge same time, so the next part is with Jessie and his shewolf goddess than move onto the next boy and he gets 2 chapters than the next boy and so on. Also on the topic of the shewolf cock for immersion I wold say give her the canine dick but if you just want to tell a good tale of boibutt sex I don't think it really matters as long as her dick is long, thick and slick and his butt is big, moist and fuckable.
I absolutely loved this chapter and I'm really looking forward to this series. I would really like it if you added a second chapter of jessie and the wolf-goddess first to explore that a bit more and in my opinion you should add the knot it makes it more wolfish. So thanks for another good chapter and here's hoping for reading more soon
Dude, your writing is sooo good. You have unmistakable talent! Would love to see at least another chapter on this pair, maybe introducing him to her small brood? As far as the knot goes, even if you give her a more human tool, I say add the knot! Again, love your stories!!
I tried to read it but can only suspend my appreciation of well-written English for so long. Why not read a little on how to do it? It costs nothing these days and there are wonderful online resources at your fingertips.
That's kind of odd considering its my first and only language xD
I love this there really needs to be more dickgirl on femboy stories. Please do a dickgirl Minotaur as one of the characters. I've always wanted to read a story like that but awesome nonetheless.
I'd like to see one more of these two . Maybe that he is an escaped slave but is now a slave to her knot ;) And can't get enough lol
Ahh... You scratch so many of my itches. Dickgirl on male, from noncon to consent, prostate massage (i hate it when anal just "feels good"), a sub learning his "natural" place. I don't really care about femboi's, but i guess you can't have it all.
One more chapter! I need to see what the wolf's tribe/pack/community looks like. And keep the dog dick. you're making monster girl's so go with the appropriate genitalia. And the boy's eye color changed from brown to blue.
Yup you are correct sir that was a mistake that I didn't spot. Darn, lol his eyes were supposed to be blue and only blue
I like the humanoid with no mussel. I think the humanism makes it a fantasy with a realistic and relatable touch. So the same with her cock! I think all the fantasy creatures should have a human cock (Size obviously bigger than humans). Wonderful story
I read two graphs and threw up in my mouth.
Great story. I agree i would like to see where this goes with the tribe beforev u move on to another character. Keep up the great work.
great first chapter i hope you do jessie part 2 next and i vote for the wolf/human cock by that i mean the head remains human but the base has a knot
I loved the way you opened the story line to lead multiple paths, and I'd like to see at least one more part with Jessie before switching perspectives. Also slap a dog cock on that wolfie babe. I think it would leave more room for variance when interacting with other races in the future.
I thought it was amazing. I vote for a human cock in shape but colored deep red like a dog's cock. I think you should do one more of Jessie before moving on, and I really like how you were able to set up such potential for variety.
I would definitely like to see a part 2 of Jessie and his she-wolf mistress. I also like the stories you have so far definitely enjoying them keep up the good work.
I really enjoyed it, though I do wish it had been a bit longer. I would definitely like to see a second chapter. I do think you should have a more animalistic cock on each of the girls. Would like to see Jessie's reaction to sitting there with his belly bloated with her cum and none of it coming out, thanks to her knot. Looking forward to more.
Really enjoyed reading it! The sex was well written and the characters were interesting.
There are people who prefer more humanoid monster girls and people who want them to be more feral, but most agree that the cock should be animal — that's a big part of the fun. The little cock-on-cock scene was already hot, but you could have had her play with her sharp K9 cock by sticking the tip into his foreskin and sliding it around his glans, or even putting the very tip into his urethra, you also missed the fun with the knot, she could have pulled out and pushed it in his butt a few times while it was still only growing, and him really feeling the pressure of the growing knot would have been nice.
I really hope you use the concept to it's fullest: varying the backdrop from forests, to swamps to jungles and old temples; giving the monster girls and the boys different personalities. The girls can range from those who use pure aggression to those who use pure trickery trough either deception, magic, alchemy or all of the above. The boys can range in both attitude and body type: some accepting the pleasure, some fighting it to the end and utterly embarrassed by cumming, some lean and wiry, some girly with big butts and puffy nipples. Different races is a plus, and, of course, having a big cock and being denied it's use is as deliciously humiliating as having a little one.
In short: great story, looking forward to more chapters and thanks for writing!
Great story look forward for next one and are you going to be using goblin, ogre, pixie, or even a imp somewhere in the near future? If yes I'm looking forward to reading them. (^-^)
This was a fantastic read! I would love to read more of this... In fact I may have gone to read all your other stories after. Lets see some of the encounters that the other boys have please!
want to see him knocked up with some weird animal dick girl magic hehehe
To start, as with one of the above commenters, I never actually post comments. But I felt it necessary to reinforce erotica that actually satisfies my tastes. Though I did feel the beginning was a bit too top-heavy with establishing the boys' backgrounds, but it's really a minor complaint.
With regards to your question though, I was imagining her cock as canine, and was a bit disappointed it wasn't described as such in detail. That said, I am glad you didn't go the other direction either, and also that you at least mentioned the knot. But I'd say give the women beast/animal cocks, especially if your next planned chapter is going to involve nagas, from the sound of the title.
Also, caught mention of a mermaid in there... looking forward to that one, as I am predisposed to aquatic themed things.
Can't wait for more from the wolf and how she treats him back at home! <3
I look forward to whatever you write next but if your still interested in auidances votes.
Serpents of the Amazon sounds good. I think it would be nice to setup a couple different of the boys stories and then we can go back for various part 2's.
Don't be scared of the dog dick! You'd be surprised what people are down for (trust me, I'd know lol.) No gripes, just came here to say that this is some damn good furry dick girl porn.
I've had furry/anthro/super breeding fetish stuff on the back burner for years, but I haven't gotten around to it, so it's nice to see someone else covering that base with some high quality, well-written smut!
Please continue this. Hopefully she gives his little dick some attention as well next time
This is one the best stories I've read on here yet. I think a dog cock/big knot would only make this series hotter. I would go for a second chapter of these two. The roughness is great.
I loved this story, I would love for her to have a cock somewhere between both, big mushroom tip, and having a fist sized knot when she cums. But that's just my humble opinion. Again excellent work, I loved it, ease write more.
Great story. Thank you.
I guess I'd rather she was more girl than wolf in future episodes. Also, inductions/submission/being broken in is great, so if he is a bit naughty in future and needs to be shown who's boss, or is shown off to one of his previous friends and is forced to admit how much he loves being fucked by his she-wolf then that would be even better.
You have to continue this story with these two same characters. Some dick sucking would be nice. I’ll read as soon as you post it.
Loved the story, I hope to see the sequel soon.
I thought it was amazing. I would definitely like to see more of Jessie, but i would personally like to see the Serpents of the Amazon first before coming back to Jessie.
Personally I'd like to see the she-wolf have a canine cock, nothing hotter than thinking of her prey being locked onto her cock while she makes them balloon with her cum. As for what to do next? I vote for serpents of the Amazon, canines are pretty common fare for this kind of erotica, serpents not so much.
Please I would like to see the “Serpents of the Amazon” come to life, then the sequel of Jesse.
Loved your story. As someone who is regularly pegged by his girlfriend, I have some suggestions on what male anal sex feels like. While it does feel good once your ass gets used to the size, when you have something big rapidly moving in and out of you, it feels extremely intense. Imagine the feeling that you get when you orgasm and you or your partner keep stimulating you. It's actually those short thrusts that feel the best.
i always wonder if these female creatures have pussies as well. Are other members of the pack normally endowed male and female? I had the same thoughts for Huntress.
Keep the cocks in the same species as the creature attributes.
I think that this should be continued until each boy fully accepts and understands his position as whatever alpha animal girl that finds him toy/bitch
Such an awesome story and world looking forward to more!
Man I love all this interspecies stuff! It's so cool to see and I hope you really do continue this.
its a shame we havnt seen more of this if it ever comes back i vote for jessie part 2 id have voted for the other but with how long its been i want to see what happens next.
It's going to be continued! Don't worry!
I'll add my contribution to the detail of the wolf's cock. What makes the story sexually arousing (and I suspect that is what your readers want) is the humanity of the wolf and givig her a cock which locked in our hero's arse I don't believe will add to the sexuality of the love making. And by the trend so far it is not rape nor imprisonment it is going to end up "love making" you write about.
Keep it up I found it particularly arousing.
This is really what life is about and then we all need to explore our minds
After getting fully made up and dressed for the first time i was not sure what would happen next or what the next step was for me.But i soon was to find out the hard way and i mean the very hard way.Some the man next door seen me made up and desided he was going to introduce his now very big hard cock to my ass and mouth he knocked on my door and when i opened it he grabbed ducked my mouth and hands behind my back.And started to take pictures of me dressed and made up.He stripped off my dress and panties showed me his hard cock and told me he was now going make me a real women.He then pushed his cock deep in my ass and fucked me hard Once done he slid his wet cock deep down my throat and filled my with cum.This went on most of the night when finished he tied me from head to toe duck tapeing my mouth closed.and put me in bed .He came back the next day and started all over again.He now comes over twice to do it all over again.
I was with you until "baby smooth back" on pg 2... don't want to think about a baby's back while trying to jerk it. Totally ruined the mood for me personally. Please use a different descriptor in the future! It's creepy.
Oh you promise soooo many chapters you wouldnt believe, so ofc it stays at 1, your an absolute piece of shitt, if your not going to finish something dont post, it isnt even good in the first place, another futa x male rape story disguised as consentual, ofc