All Comments on 'Brenda's First Date'

Congrats on your first posting! A nice "tight" little story;-), as it were.

ALeverkühn

Very cool. Stories set in parallel universes where people are more open about sex usually mean "everyone's doing it all the time", so it's interesting to see one where it hasn't gone *that* far. The way the different religions have different rules was well thought out.

This story started so innocently. An amusement similar to enjoying the pretty colors of a coral snake.

And then, like getting shoved off the edge of a cliff , segued into surreal satire.

there is no story here - none

is this? However shall I go on living while not knowing? Incidentally, I've never read Lord of the Rings (The Hobbit, yes, when I was 12, I think.) I can count my blessings I have someone chivalrous enough to quote from it for my entertainment. No doubt there's a line in there somewhere... 'We're not in Kansas anymore, Froto.' FYI, I seldom, if ever re-purpose anything. Well...almost never anyway.

I loved the alternate universe and the slightly different names. We should hear more of this era.

Puleeeeze....

Terrible story....