All Comments on 'Brent's Prep for the Prison Doc'

by woofdaddy2

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LoveDrewandEmmettLoveDrewandEmmettabout 10 years ago
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Your stories show potential, but your writing could definitely use practice. I would like to see more descriptions of the way the things done to Brent feel rather than just the actions.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Please don't stop writing. Your stories are amazing!

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