All Comments on 'Brian and Briana 0001'

YUMMEH!

sorry for my grammer errors, I'm fuckin DRUNK!!!

WOW… it is necessary that bree would be boned before being filled and covered with the cum of his brother in love… it is necessary a very large incest so that it continuous during the school Anne

Nice start waiting for the rest!

Great start! I would agree that 0001 isn't necessary, but that is just a small quibble. I hope you keep the chapters coming fast and furious! LOVED the scene between Mary Jo and Bree!

Be yourself and look around for well constructed stories.

Interesting story, thanks.

This thoroughly enjoyable and original story indicates that the author has a vivid imagination as well as a talent for writing. The idea of a community where eligible teenagers are in such short supply that they form a "swap and swing" club is almost Orwellian in its concept. Bravo.

5/5

the story was good but the spelling of the name brian and bryan was annoying

This is a great start! But there has to be more, much more. I'd not only would like to read about how Brian & Bree give their virginity to each other, but also how the school year (and their membership in the club) progresses!

I don't care to see this love story turned into a fuckfest with them fucking all the other high school folks. I think it should be a sweet thing between the two of them, I am sure that it won't just be that. I know, it is a porn story and that is how they go. Just this one time I wish that it would not be that way (I don't know what is wrong with me today, LOL). Thanks for writing however it turns out. I'm sure I will enjoy it no matter how it goes.

I was wondering what it would be like to be her

Who says sex and humor don't mix?! This is one of the funniest stories I've read on Literotica. Simply over the top. Kudos to you, sir.

Probably picking at nits here, but the word "yama" means mountain in Japanese. In other words, you either say Mount Fuji or Fujiyama. Otherwise, a fun little tale (tail?).

~Monica

So sucking fucking hot, more and more please and soon. Cunt crazed fucker Lanc’s UK.