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Click hereShe had been right, Nathan was the best man for her. But not the right man to be her husband. As she watched him dress, she knew he would be gone before the evening turned to night.
It had been the hallmark of their stormy series of relationships. She was glad he had come to her wedding, that Guy had chosen him as their best man. Vicky tucked her soiled panties into the pocket of his jacket.
"Souvenir." She said.
"I'll treasure them always." Nathan said flourishing them before his nose. "I've left a little something for you too, with Guy to aid you in your married life."
After Nathan left Vicky showered, her two attendants returning to dress her in a peacock sequined evening dress with cape sleeves, the glittering bride was ready to party.
"Did everything go alright with Guy?" Vicky queried. "Only I thought I heard you screwing next door." Andrea and Sarah, exchanged glances.
"We did as you asked, we kept Guy busy. In fact we unpacked your wedding present from Nathan, gave Guy a chance to try it out."
Relaxed Vicky left the room to find her new husband to be by his side for the rest of the night. She didn't want to upset Guy, she had chosen him for all his loving faithful qualities. She was ready to have his babies, settle in one place. The challenges and adventures were done, thrills were fine but finally you have to compromise it was time for sense and good old reliable Guy.
When they returned to the room for their first night as man and wife Guy went ahead of her. Vicky found him waiting for her beside the bed , a white leather whip at his side. "Strip wife! I want to try out our wedding present from Nathan. I'm going to continue with your training." As the tingle of excitement spread out between Vicky's thighs she knew she was ready to be Guy's wife. By marrying the right man she had picked the best man after all..
You certainly lack the ability to self-critique your own work, if you did you never would have submitted this...whatever the fuck it was supposed to be.
Thats right. Bull Feathers. While her hubby is fucking two girls next door, Nathan is still playing games with her? Where did they have all this time? Thats the real question. There''s people waiting just outside yet Nathan takes his sweet time just undressing himself in that one page people have lived and lost their lifes I don''t know where this authors head is at, with the way the ending was written, he could have included it in the first page also. Well, Nathan showed he was a sadist. Is Guy turned into a sadist with one gift? I thought he loved her? Anyway, This is how you can tell that a male wrote the story. To much detail and no action.
finished and she can finally fuck her new husband without possibly infecting him?
of what could have been.<P>
You don't need excess in the extreme to cover for your inexperience. Lack of plausibility leaves little of interest behind.
Writer - you seem to want to write more than just a jack off theme in awkward blue notes. If I am wrong then my apology.<P>
So if it doesn't seem likely or possible or is just disgustingly gross except for the sick ones realize that what you do is a waste of time and talent for you and us.<P>
I think you need to step back and decide which direction you won't take and why.