All Comments on 'Bridal Dance'

I especially liked the way the bride took us through the wedding from start to finish, with her thoughts at each turn. Great read!

Well written and pretty hot! I like your stream of consciousness style. Personally I was hoping that Jules would return to Aruba a year later with her 3-month old daughter. And that they would continue their former lifestyles. Oh, well, have to retire sometime I suppose

This isn't the dumbest story I've ever read, but it's trying hard.

I Like gangbang stories and the thought of a bride being fucked by two dozen men on her wedding night is pretty hot stuff, though the money element to the story was a bit tedious.

Gee dude, your repertoire is filled with sluts, jezebels and whores. No need to write about your family’s affairs, dude!

Try something different for a change.

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nice. romantic