All Comments on 'Bride Submission: Boss's Bitch'

I can't wait for the next Chapter.

Don't keep us all waiting! This story seems so fresh and different, yet so raw and sexy. I love the combination of her strong feminist politics and her newly recognized submissive side. So far this has easily been one of the better stories to post here. I would not be truthful if I did not complement you beyond the concept you've developed and praise your writing as well. This is crisp and sensual, sexy and slutty. You deliver it all with a deft light touch, the sex is well written, as is the interplay of your characters. I only wonder what if anything she will have left for the honeymoon, yet with your ability to write I am thinking that the honeymoon, as well as the wedding and the pre-wedding will be extraordinary as well. I will be patient as all good things are worth the wait. Thank you for being so up lifting for me and I am sure all of the readers. Write on Silk write on!

But this was simply terrible! What happened to your stories? As of late your postings have been badly written drivel.

Always love how your sub characters first resist then accept their submissiveness.

Brittany being a feminist and a slut? Mr pickerton can help her correct this by having.jis black bitch dominant daughter invite Brittany for an overnight to do some legal work such as a simple will and put her through the paces of sucking cliy and being fucked by a strp on. Next day she will be a total submissive for black cock and pussy plus a bbc babymaker and will helpbrecruit virgin conservative young women to black sexing and submission.

Isn't it odd that those who criticise your writing hide behind anonymity. If they can't own their words they shouldn't write them.

I can't wait for the entire story.

You are one of my favoriate writers and if you keep writting I will keep comming for you.

such a hot story, please continue it.

kisses

bobbi

Such a great series. Couldn't quite get my head around her using her sexuality outside of the Order to get ahead in her career, wasn't sure if it fit in with character, is it not a betrayal of her fiance going outside the Order etc? Really hoping you continue on with it though, especially if it's more in line with the first entry.

Simply can't wait for the next installment!! I love everything I've read of yours. This story touches my sub side. Makes me sigh with contentment. Please please finish the series!! :)

Your writing is fantastic your my favourite on here but please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please will you release the next part to this amazing story, I can't wait to read it. I check your pages every day to see of you have released it.

Hope to read your next part very soon

Hi,

I do hope to continue this series, but am working on a couple other sequels as well as a few contest stories.

Great story Sexy. Will love the next part and the next part, etc.

Great story so far, can't wait for the next chapter & the following chapters. Keep up the great work. & a big thumbs up for your stories.

I hope you get back to this series soon.

Can't wait till the next chapter. Great story line!!!

please continue this series i can hardly wait to see what happens to her next. lucky little slut, wish i was her.

kisses bobbi

And I can't wait till the next episode - looking forward to the lesbian orgy.

When do you submit the next episode?

Please more!

these two chapters could lead into a long series if the author would like it to go there. btw 5* on both chapters so far.

PLEASE MORE, WHEN. THIS IS AWESOME WORK. YOU BEST SERIES YET. LOVE YOU JASMINE

I can't wait for the continuation of the Bride Submission. I would love to marry or be born in the Syndom society. Ummmm

I just read both parts and I'm craving so much more!

Please cont soon

Excellent first Two Chapters: Super Story. Very good Erotic Content. Have scored five (5 *) Stars. Cant Wait for Sequel/s

Ranji

Looking forward to future episodes. You appear to have an outline, even if you haven't kept to your schedule.

This series is some of your finest work!!! Please continue!

Some of your best work. I have enjoyed every minute as Brittany embraces her inner slut. Cannot wait for the next installment!

I enjoyed the story very much. Please give us more, want to see Brittany degraded because I know she is going to love it. Can't wait for more of the story. Love your writing.

Great story and would love to read more of the series please add more soon

I come back to this series every few months or so and really enjoy it. I can't wait to see what other shenanigans Brittany gets into.

Just re-read this and it's still excellent 2nd time around. 😜. It would be great to have the next instalment! Thx.

Love the stories of yours

The rest of this definitely needs to happen.

ive read this a few times and really want the cont... mostly to see what happens with her familes.

Please continue I'm so intrigued

really like the concept and how she's learning to work the system. hoping you return to this even if it's been 2+ years.

kisses

Please continue

Awesome story. I hope you continue!

Nice, everything I like, oral, anal a bit of fisting capped off by a bit of ATM, keep it up Jasmine, your stories have it all and always get me wet.

I would think that she would be more intuitive than to give all of that away before she had more insurances that the job was hers. I guess a slut is a slut and that is how she wants to do it.

I need more. So wet

How amazing that her boss is ready to fuck her... I definitely need more of his big cock in stories.

These stories about the Order of Syndom are my favorite on all of Literotica, please write more!!! The bride adapted so quickly, soooooo hot

These stories are soooo hot! More please!

A nice diversion before the main orgy event. Punishment? I don’t think so. Her seduction prepared her for an aggressive attack that she never would have tried. Good story line.

Im so damn wet reading all the order of syndom stories, more please!!