All Comments on 'Bridesmaid'

Lovely, sexy, beautiful description of two people discovering each other and themselves. Thank you

Kathi:

A wonderful story of mature love and loving. Erotic, with humor and gentle, friendly lovers. A great way to make love. Thank You. Ronnie W.

A real story of two diverse people who find that they are compatible despite their difference in ages. Warm and loving. I bet they stay together for a long time.

Warm tale of excitement; your breaking into paragraphs and a few typos were slightly distracting but the story - oh!

Thank you from a younger man who enjoys women who know what they want.

Nicely done! I don't understand the other reader's comment re the paragraphs and typos. I found no typos and the story is property formatted into paragraphs as a dialogue story.

Iloved it ,it was well wwritten and i loved every bit of it ,thxxx!!! nathan

IAbsolutely loved this story. Can't wait to hear about their continuing explorations and discoveries in Tokyo.(ie the quick reference to water sports in the bathroom.) Any chance mom may get involved?

Excellent detail. I'm enjoying all your work. I'm glad I found you.

Age differences have been handled

sensitively, realistically and beautifully

Fun, affectionate story! The great thing about mature women is that they know what they like, and are often a lot less shy than younger ones about saying it. Brava!

very nice sensitive story of the development of a real relationship---with great sex as an accompaniment. very sexy-- especially the stockings. nice slow build up, satisfying ending. top marks!

You've really drawn some engaging and exciting characters. Well paced and a fine writing style. Not to mention hot and sexy as hell. Glad I found your stuff. Best regards, Kal

fantastic would love to see a continueation of this story in japan

nicely done

A well written story of a vibrant woman who had never allowed herself to be treated to having her cunt licked and brought to orgasim. I was pleased that she allowed this wonderful gift to evolve

A great story. Maybe would hear about Sharon's adventure in Tokyo.''

Erotic without being too hot . Surprisingly, the slow pace & the finer details of their love making made the whole story more enjoyable.Exploring each other through sex.

5 'matured' stars.

Very well done because it was so realistic. Enjoyed it very much.

A wonderfully written story! I only wish that you were still writing here. Thank you!