All Comments on 'Bridget the Bossy Bridezilla'

Have always enjoyed your work on this site Retro, and this is no exception.

Found myself laughing out loud, especially the scenes by the river. You really need a sequel

sequel needed

Disjointed, mindless drivel. Hard to follow. Could have summed all up in about 2 paragraphs.

Where is the friggin ending?

The ending of this story is a twist ending, that brings together all the different storylines, and the characters go on with their lives. What happens to them next? Who knows? Lots of literary works end this way.

I didn't catch it on the first reading, but I didn't see the ending coming, RetroFan…

BTW, I thought this was pretty funny, especially Janos' feelings about grunge music; I feel the same way as him, and I was born in 1981...

Of all the stories I have written, this was one of the ones I had the most fun with. I loved writing about the loser brother Craig who demonstrates exactly what not to say to infertile women. He would have to be one of the biggest losers I have written about aside from Todd, the fat bully from 'The PTA Queen Bee & the Teen Rebel' stories, who is so stupid that he thinks about himself in the third person.

Janos's comments about Grunge - that he would get a gun and kill himself if he made Grunge music - are somewhat prophetic of a major event in this genre of music that takes place about 8 months after this story is set.

I loved Bridget’s wild abandon with his brother and how he was given all the access that Ben will never get. I do hope that he comes to his senses, but when I was younger I watched many young men get married to the obviously wrong girl. When you are young there is a time when there is a constant trail of people getting married and you do see some amazing couplings. I loved the loose ends....just what is the extent of Bridget’s relationship to Daddy? If the marriage takes place will there be a secret supply of losers who she allows to fuck her... and Ben never gets to find out, yet she often has him sleep on the sofa and runs him ragged, while he constantly tries to search for the fix. Let us hope that his experiences at the client’s house brings him to his senses. Or, would we prefer to have his subsequent misfortune played out for us? This is as good a story as can be found anywhere on Literotica and I recommend that readers take it to their hearts and spread the news of a great writer.

Hi Regrets - I'm pleased you liked this story so much. I really enjoyed writing it, especially Ben's loser brother Craig.

RetroFan

Would love to see Ben and Casey have their own steamy session. That's an ultimate betrayal to loser Craig. I also want to see Ben having an affair with Caroline. Cheating on his fiancee with her sister is HOT!

I'm pretty sure Tracy fantasizes about her own son.

Nicely told, great character development! Ben still marrying Bridget? Poor guy!

Really enjoyed this story, so well written and with humor, especially with younger brother Craig. And a twist to the ending as well. Can't believe that poor Ben is still marrying Bridget - don't do it!