All Comments on 'Brie and Madison Ch. 1'

As a man who isn't ashamed to admit that I love to read girl-girl action, I was very impressed--especially with it being your first story. The only possible change I might recommed is a bit more "intimacy" and character development... perhaps just a tad slower build-up to a thunderous climax!

is a great first impression. I hope to read more from you.

A FRENCH cheese isnt it?What is she doing with a bit of french.very well it seems.

I truly enjoyed your foray into erotic fiction. Well done indeed. I found your story to be "very stimulating". Keep your stories coming and I'm sure that I'll be coming back for more.

Liked this story alot. Very sweet and sexy and hot. There is one issue in that you had Brie change into pyjamas but then Madison is taking off her dress - just a little issue that editing would have caught.

She was in her PJ's then as Madison went to undress her she was in her dress again Oopps. Other then that good story.