All Comments on 'Bringing Her Along Ch. 07'

by honourableboy

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Proofread

Very good story, but you need to proofread better or get an editor to help you. *5*

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Found this on the second day

And I've been eagerly awaiting each installment. Highly satisfying series *wink*. But yes, a proofreader is a must.

Can't wait to read your next submission!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Fantastic series. I would love to read about slaves auctioned in the previous chapter.

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