All Comments on 'Bringing Home a Surprise'

I enjoyed reading your story. Thank you for sharing.

Don't leave this story as a one & done.

Great story

Cries out for more. Please continue.

Nice story. Thanks for writing it - I really enjoyed reading it.

A just reward for a kind soul.

It flowed so well and wasn't rushed at all. Can't wait to read more.

Lovely short about damsels in distress. Wish you'd give us the rest of it.

Make a sequel were he fucks the daughters also

A story should have a beginning, middle, and ending/resolution.

I was happily enjoying this well-written story, when it just quit, somewhere in the middle.

4 stars for what I had thought was going to be a 5 star story.

It's not too late, if FLrider would come out of retirement(?).

I read a Literotica story where the second part came 6 years after the first. Another very loooong series took 11 years.

I had thought the idea of the Anonymous just before me might be a possibility.

Paul in Oklahoma

Thanks for sharing.

Hope the rubber breaks or the pill doesn't work and he puts a bun or two in her oven. He jobs, housekeeper lover, wife, and mother... EXCELLENT STORY!

Wow a great start to a May/December romance story and then it left me as a reader wanting more. Come on FLrider, finish the story. 5++STARS