All Comments on 'Broken'

no just dumb filth

is rubbish. Or in the USA, trash.

Your waist is the slim bit above your hips.

Learn the difference before you try to write again, thick cunt.

Story was ok but an is Editor needed.

But you do need a copy editor.

I guess i'm dense but the last line just doesn't make sense to me.

last line makes no sense

Bit of editing needed.

good Story. 4 stars. her Transformation came way too fast though.

pure waste of my time to read it

Thank you so much for this outstanding little story. I'd like it to be longer