All Comments on 'Broken Bliss Ch. 02'

So far, so good. I love what Jason did to his ex. I hope that next chapter is just as good (if not better.)

I liked how he fucked jenny before he fucked jenny! Great job!

but waaay to much saying "brother" and "sister". they're siblings, they call each other by their first names and some other less choice names.

I especially like how you snuck your other stories characters into this one lol. well played! ;) keep it up

Can't wait to see what happens next.

Please keep them coming

I know that the rest will rise to the standards that you have set.

Only problem I've had with the series is the timeline for this episode with regard to the vaginal/anal sex--shouldn't this take place before Mom bathes him? He can tell her he has closure with Jenny and she can react as obliquely as ever. Maybe she feels she has to pay extra attention to washing his penis. This works better with the later scene with LIsa so he doesn't put his dirty cock in her. Unless she had a crush on Jenny and secretly liked the idea of a dirty cock with Jenny juice on it going inside her....?

You know,I didn't figure it out until Mom told Jason about John's girlfriends that John is the same one from your other story 'I Found My Sister Stripping'.Talk about realization.Lol

Could have used a little more argument between Jason and Jenny, though.

i love the way Jenny get fucked in the ass, auw

It's great how you tie three of your stories together. Great fun to read.

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...fucking awesome!! Its been a few weeks since Ive found a story Ive enjoyed so much, and its still not over!! Yay! The only thing that makes this story better is that last night my wife told me to 'wake her uP' at 5 a.m. This morning ;). Turning out to be a great morning!

It really does, I'm laughing as I write this, I swear.

Why did you make the main character such a pathetic weak willed ball sac? It's fucking annoying.

2 stars.

Thanks for sharing.

Jason isn't much of a hypocrite, is he? He berates himself over Lisa and having sex with her, but he doesn’t have any guilt at all about sex with their mother. 4/5 but it really should be a three.