All Comments on 'Broken Ch. 01'

Very well written, and thoroughly engaging. I'm already invested in the plot. (:

I enjoyed your story, but felt I needed to tell you that women don't have Adam's apples. The rest of it was great

Take this weirdo training shit to bdsm where it belongs. yes, i know she's a rape slave, but its so painfully fucking boring it reads like a bdsm dom manual.