All Comments on 'Broken Ch. 02'

I quite like the way this story may be developing. It is a genre I like, but one that has been done over and over so it would be very difficult to make it feel unique therefore extremely hard to keep the interest of experienced Lit readers. This chapter was more interesting than the last one, both chapters are well written, if there were typos and grammatical issues I didn't notice. I am interested to see how this grows, could be compelling reading.

I hope she gets free and brings that whole place down. I love her courage not to give up and to play the game as well as he is. kudos to her!

Finally a story where the leading man doesn't have a particularly well endowed member. I gave you 5 stars just for that little bit of accuracy.

Love the music in the story. So far this story has my attention.

I'm excited to keep reading. I thoroughly enjoy the intellectual spin this story has. It's refreshing. Keep it up. (:

I have two more chapters to read as leave this review it's a great story I love that's she's smart and hoping she gets away you don't see that to much on this site especially with the way she seems so smart it be sad to see her broken at very least have her end up happy but not broken cause even if we like to read these stories still wrong to kiddnap force people it be nice to see the victim win im always for that lol

I am begging you to make the antagonist be the one to brake this time. I'd love to see Alex end up falling for her to the point he aids her escape. Then when he takes her virginity and he's basking in the after glow she slips a knife literally into his heart smiling the whole time! Follow up with the whole operation being raided thanks to her information and you'll have a perfect ending!

I'm really enjoying this story. Finally, a protagonist who doesn't go all Stockholm Syndrome at the drop of a hat.