All Comments on 'Broken Ch. 06'

by DarkFantasy56

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
more please:)

Loving the story so far.... Just some minor issues in your thought process though... If she were tethered by her ankle she would now have been able to slip on her panties... Was a bit of a mental throw off but other then that I am loving your writing and style.

CUSpacecowboyCUSpacecowboyalmost 9 years ago

If she couldn't get the stockings on with the ankle bracelet then how did she get the panties on?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
enjoying the series

well-written and great tension. Looking forward to the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Wining...

Merlot from the refrigerator? White Zin should be served cold, but mostly to those poor souls in hell as an added torture (this is not too say they are NOT some drinkable Zins).

Simple rule: White dinner wines: cooler than cellar temperature. Red wines between room and cellar temperature.

Signed,

Glenn O

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