All Comments on 'Broken Ch. 07'

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Ellienora35Ellienora35about 9 years ago
Holes

When does she pee? He made her get up, immediately go make breakfast, drink coffee and two bottles of water and then stand there for hours. She probably would be getting quite uncomfortable about the time she woke up, let alone after she's hanging there.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Maybe a little less indifference?!?...

If I knew that he has planned something for me,... if I were to be suspended and stuff,.... I would be scared like heck, my stomach would be in knots. I would struggle to do what he asks of me. You know...

Maybe you could I've a little bit more expression to that?!?...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
More please.

Great story. Have read it twice. Please give us more. Thanks!

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