All Comments on 'Broken Hands Matt Pt. 02'

I enjoyed your writing, the characters were believable and the Progression of the storyline was good. But even me, using english as a second language, noticed some typing Errors. But Overall ,I would very much like to read your next one. Keep on writing.

Such a pity about all the errors

Would be a lot better story if you explained how the total impossible parts of the story

Came to be possible as the medical facts and physical injuries would allow a total different story line to be expected

Fuck the spelling errors! This was one hot chapter! Awesome writing! My boner spewed hot cream as I read this!

Good writing. Nice potential. Get the grammar and spell check skills in line and you'll be in great company with other established writers to this site.

A good editor will make your stories read real smooth. You need no help in the sexy parts they were HOT!! Thanks for sharing looking forward to future submissions.

Shame about the pill though

i enjoyed your stories thoroughly and believe you should continue with this one a few errors but overall still good

Should have dragged it out a bit more.

I love this scenario please keep it going!

What has happened to chapter 3 ?

more please

So, hot and arousing. His step-sister is beautiful and also very horny. Hopefully, the doctor will take the casts off and tell him to be careful. Then he can feel her up, finger her to great horniness and then they can screw each other all the time. I'd like his step-sister to tell him how horny his big cock makes her too. Cannot wait for more. Thank you.

quite liked this story my only gripe is that it could have been a longer story and gone into more detail about Matt and Amanda's history. What happened to their parents how their relationship developed etc.

***Thanks for the read.

That was so hot! I wish that my brother had fucked me at least once. I know that we would still be fucking today. I loved him so much!