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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Contnue the story, great possibilities to carry foreard the romance to a happy ending

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Great story -- and sex to come?

Bill and Karen seem a match! When she takes his polo shirt off and places her hands and lips to his muscular chest, I hope she finds some sexy hair there! She's already felt his cock and pubes! Let's see that cock grow for them too! They will be good for each other!

reader1000reader1000over 6 years ago
Love this story.

Felt natural and real. Nitpick: from a car nut. First Impala was 1958 model. Belair convertibles before but no Impala. No biggie. Looking forward to more of this romance, please.

KarensClit1990KarensClit1990over 5 years ago
I liked the sexual banter between the two of them

Wished your story was longer.

I liked the chemistry you developed.

Thank you

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Cruel story

Hurting Linda was cheap... There are better easier ways.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago
NO!

old man young woman, just NO!!!

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Great story of 2 people getting together to get over their pasts.

Just 1 observation - the Chevrolet Impala didn't come out until 1958.

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