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Anonymousover 8 years agoEditor needed.
Please, please, please find someone to edit your writing. It jumps around and basic misspellings are common. Your concept is great but nigh unreadable.
hacked_soulover 8 years agoAuthorNo more flashbacks
This was the last chapter to use flashbacks (skips), I played around with it and read it over a few weeks apart. So this experiment failed, next chapters won't skip around and thanks for the feedback.
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