All Comments on 'Broken on My Break'

Awesome story! Few typos, but the subject matter was fantastic! Please continue!

Just reading the synopsis was enough for me to get excited. Though I would have enjoyed this chapter being broken into 2. One for each of his new Mistress's as I felt that the scene with Charity was rushed just to reach completion.

Though I am hoping that you will include more chapters, it doesn't have to be an actual story with a plot but just more interactions between the three.

Makebsure you continue this story, i loved it, was wishing i was the nerd

please write more!!

Very erotic story. I thought it was very hot. I wonder what the girls do with each other? I wonder if they top each other or just feed off of massive loads of cum.

The first time I was picked up in a bar was much like you describe. Thinking the girl was a girl only to find out she had a package. Thing is once you find out about the package you are already in love and just accept it.

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I would give ANYTHING to be that lucky!!!!! Just the thought makes my asshole flutter for a massive cock to invade it!!! And for a week, HEAVEN!!!!!

Your story is so awesome!!!

I could do everything to be this man.

I can't wait to read what happen to him on his week break.

More please!

would be my dreams cum true ,being forcibly by one would be great but two ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh yessssssss

Loved it

You won't stop there !!! :D

Keep going that was a very good job.

Love this story. Wish this happened to me. Thank you for writing my every sub raped white bottom desire. Looking forward too reading the next chapter.

Anyone used like that by would have to become a fulltime bottom bitch to Tranny Doms for the rest of his life . Five stars all the way.

Loved it ! I would love to be some sexy shemale's bottom bitch like this.

I loved the story. It started fun then moved to flirty and passionate. From there it got rough but in the end a guy got his ass fucked by a big cock not just once but many times. I would love to get double teamed like that.

Your story was incredible, I would love to be their little cum slut! I'm so horny now I'm gonna go fill my ass up and cum all over myself!! I just love the way warm cum feels. Ta, ta

I hope there is more are the girl's going to make their new slut wear female clothing and put a plug in his pussy to hold their seed in

Great story. Big shemale cock gets me everytime

Like the rest, I loved the story but the lack of editing was too much of a distraction for me. From 5 stars to 3.

Thank you for writing and posting here.

Please continue this story.

nice,idea, poorly executed

That feeling of being complete, Yes! That is what we all need. To feel complete. I like the way they crush his balls and yet it takes nothing away from his finaly being a complete person.

Let me get this straight a bunch of trans women, drug this guy, kidnap him, tie him up and rape him repeatedly, and 20 commentors rave " great story". That's more than a little sick. Does Literotica have no standards? Would a gang rape story with a female victim be published?

You deliberately ignored the disclaimer at the beginning and the tags just to insult people? Come on now

Well I hope you finish the story with the hottest part which is when they cut his throat with the scalpel and watch him choke to death as he bleeds out. Now that is sexy!

You know I been straight for 59 years of my life and I trying to sever my mistresses but I been trying to stay straight but I think it's going to end in December I read this make me want it so bad please make more of this stories

Was going great until he stared liking it 😢

Alsome I so looking for .y first time so very much