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All Comments on 'Broken Toys'

by GoddessVictoria

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FA_JFFA_JFabout 10 years ago
Well now

Something with a nice, new twist. You built things well through the course of the story. The reader, depending on their preferences, feels increasingly aroused or angered as it progresses, then...in my opinion, a happy ending. Nicely done, Goddess.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Well that was just silly

Too obvious and not as clever as you thought.

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