All Comments on 'Brother and Sister Go Camping'

George is over 6 foot, with jet-black hair? Give him a bit of chest hair and a few muscles, and let Vicky have another go at him. He sounds like a great guy!

For the read.

More chapters, and sex!

a little short - the sex was ok. but it was a little cold to me.

The writing was for this story was egregious. The sex scene makes no sense. There is no buildup, little back story, and it feels as though the story was written in 5 minutes.

That's a harsh comment about taking 5 minutes. I spent at least 6 on it!

I selected the wrong option. Yes that comment was from me.

one day I hope my writing can be so egregious

Thanks for reading my story and adding your comment. I have no idea what egregious means. I assume it's another word for 'Fantastic' or ‘Amazing’.

Egregious means outstandingly bad ; shocking.

These guys may have a point about no build up and little back story but the rest was good man. You just need more details.

Waiting for the next chapter. When mom isn't driving.

How soon for the next camping trip

can't even commend you for the effort, sorry man

Good write but way to short.

Really came alive when he said “knickers” . The magic in that word, even after all these years. Story needs to be longer and groaning with extra details and sub plot.

Cheating with purpose makes me ask if its right or wrong.Take this story for example where the sister asks her younger brother to fuck her and cheat on her husband,on one hand Paul is described as fat,lazy,and irritable.But big sister is horny as fuck and her husband won't give her what she needs so she asks her brother to satisfy her and he does.

Now is it wrong for her to cheat because of that,I would have to say yes,cause the husband is not doing his duty to keep his wife happy by fucking her.Also do I think sister she confront her husband and tell him to put out or get out,again I say yes cause the husband just sounds like a total asshole to his wife and her needs.

Hell if I were the sister I would leave him and go be with brother fulltime,and raise that baby as his and even have 3 or 4 more of her brothers,and after the divorce have both brother and sister fly to Las Vegas and get married at one of those quick wedding chapels in five or ten minutes and live happily ever after.The husband can go fuck himself the fucking pig.

Finally do I think cheating is wrong if one or the other is still in love with the other,yes,but if neither one is still in love then damn right it is alright to cheat since marriage is about partnership and when one is not holding up his or her end of the deal its time to go elsewhere.I hope Brother and Sister can throw her husband to the curb and move Brother in and just breed like rabbits all the time,how beautiful would that be?.

Who is Lucy?

wish she was my sister

Good story. Why did she marry Paul?

Can’t wait for the next chapter.

Great story

Loved the story

What a lucky horny brother.

I was expecting a continuation of the previous story featuring Susan the Escort and her brother. But I'm not going to quibble over it. This was okay too. But once again it was just a fuck story and not a love story. And on top of that, it was a single page quickie. I'm not a one-pump chump and I don't really enjoy stories that are either. You should be thinking about 8000 words minimum. That's about two full literotica pages plus a tiny bit of a third. 3/5