All Comments on 'Brother and Sister Take a Ride Ch. 02'

While there are a few similar stories in here this one was a great read. I hope you plan to keep going with this. So much more to experience yet. Just hope the open minded parents does not include Daddy/daughter.

Hey thanks for the comment. Yes it is a simple story that is similar to a lot on here. I wanted to focus on describing vivid sex scenes and hopefully they were! I definitely plan on continuing and expanding the story. The first one was kind of an experiment to be honest I had no idea people would enjoy it.

Please keep this story going it is simple and yet excellent

Keep going, this is a good story, perhaps you could give us longer chapters in future?

Excellent, but don't include Mom/Son. Just stick to brother/sister.

i gave it 5 stars, i agree with the comments it could be longer - but i like where its headed and i'm anxious to read more. could develop the characters a little more.

just keep the erotica between them...then turn it into romance...love with incest is best...great job with this story so far...keep going

Keep it up. Awaiting more from the series...

I loved it! Another chapter with just his sister, and then one where he first gets his mom.

Hope to see more from you

BEAUTIFUL SERIES OF LOVE AND TENDERNESS.

CAN'T WAIT FOR NEXT CHAPTER

I am late to the party with this story and oh my god it is so fucking good. I would love to read more about John's mum and sister being pumped full with cum. Maybe even Emily's dad pumping her full of cum too.

I can't wait to find out what happens next ;)'

About time Mom got involved

Now what's this about mom and emily getting loads of cum.? And what about dad,? I hope a part3 is tap. good read thanks

Series is going nicely, but we’re getting close to ass fucking, aren’t we? Sure hope so.

But before the “main course”’comes the appetizer & let’s not beat around the bush ;

( pardon the pun) , but I think a torrid page in the story of an episode of anilingus would really spice up this novel , yes ?