All Comments on 'Brother Bother?'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Awesome!

MORE!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Kitten writes: "for Mom and Dad it was different, they were a settled married couple and the sex was just different, is all, but still – it was sex. I'd take even settled married sex over nothing at all!"

In a lasting (and loving) relationship the sex is infinitely better. That is why people establish patterns or live together, or make commitments. But, relationships have to be maintained. People who learn to care and share tend to cling to their relationships.

In the animal world some species work to maintain relationships (i.e. care and share) throughout life, others have 15 second connections and forget about it. Only people are able to choose and decide.

A well written story for a new author! Thanks.

CapewideCapewideover 12 years ago
Nice start

I can't wait for the finish.

dbroseleydbroseleyover 12 years ago

Enjoy the story, Hope there are more to come.

Monagamous_NowMonagamous_Nowover 12 years ago
Very hot...

... keep it cumming....:)

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
seems rushed

just a little to rushed and no real background or ending

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Wonderful!

I enjoy it! To the point, and exciting. Could use a bit of detail, but it was well done.

skip2951skip2951over 12 years ago
good

quick hot and to the point.....more soon

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 12 years ago
Sweet

A good hot short story

Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
not good

way to rushed minimal background and a rush to sex plus no real end equal a half assed story and half a story is worse than no story at all.

greenhawk46greenhawk46over 10 years ago
hot quicky

later chapters can allow you more time to let these two develop a different relationship-this chapter was fine-a nice quick pent-up feelings kind of sex between sibs-nicely written-thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
waste of time

no background no character development no end just a piss poor rush to unrealistic sex sorry i waste time on this one.

Familyluv2114uFamilyluv2114uabout 4 years ago
Sweet Jesus!!!

I thought your daddy/daughter stories were HOTT but after reading this lol in in such an AWE.... For the simple fact that I too have had countless fantasies AND orgasms for my older sister throughout a the years growing up...She is five years older which makes it even sexier...But thank you to much for this submission I REALLY enjoyed it!

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