All Comments on 'Brother Comes Home'

A trail of cum leaking across her leg? I was slightly enjoying this story until you put that line in there. This story has been re-done too much. But it was well written and I didn't catch any typos or syntac errors. Good try.

Very nice flow. Slow and good build up. Enjoyed it.

I thought it was a fine little tale and was not at all put off by the line about the cum on her leg. Keep writing! You can tell me a story anytime and I'm sure I speak for others who will continue to enjoy anything you may submit, providing it's as good as this one. Thanks for your work.

Do you ever do every involve spanking in your stories?

what the hell... troll comment here

Delightful story---well-written and hot. They're about the right age for this behavior; and thanks for not giving him an unbelievably outsized dick! As for the semen on her thigh, it's pretty normal for a condom not to hold everything so it leaks as it comes out and off. (Or am I missing something here?)

She has evidently had as many fantasy's as him but she's being careful even in her dreams. Sissy and I 'discovered' each other long before college. We were both jailbait. High School, even. But age doesn't stop true love. Now, she's a soccer-mom and me a lawyer and we have 4 kids. Two sets of twins! We were sophomores and started by watching each other masturbate. She had found my condoms. I've still got that box of condoms. Sadly the box was unopened since I'd had no occasion to use one. The rest, as they say, is history. Love brother/sister stories because they feel more real to me.

its realy easy to find incest porn than a real storie wich is not what i want i want to read it and feel the emotion that the writier got and the rush of doing this action with a sibling i got so wet just wish i had a brother :/

Wish I had a sibling to do it with on a regular basis

including their food, very boring!

So good and hot .... I like a slow plot to grow as you read it and have the soft tender approach until Amy was ready to take his cock into her virgin pussy for the first time. Now that they have both cum, the next time hopefully Amy will keep control, take another condom and screw him slowly being on top. Yes, we need more chapters very soon. Thank you.

This was great. We need a sequel. How does it affect their day to day, do they continue. Do they feel guilty the next day we need to know

The condom wasn't removed yet still cum was streaking down her leg... Did it break? What happened to it?

That story remind me of me and my brother when we first had sex it felt so good my aunt has sex with me

Boooooooo write a better story. This story has so much potential but seems like you were lazy on the build up.