All Comments on 'Brother Froced To Work Naked'

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PhotogguyPhotogguyover 11 years ago
Outstanding!

Wow! I mean, wow!

daerondaeronabout 11 years agoAuthor
Thanks. Authors note

Thank you for your comment. I'd like to apologize for the misspelling in the title. I was having problems down loading and by the third attempt didn't notice I spelled forced wrong. I can't change it now so please let that go and enjoy the story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
very good

really enjoyed it. will be checking out your other stories later. "Oh, he got hit by a bus and a garbage truck in Europe, he's dead" this had me seriously laughing for a minute or two. i love happy endings.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Incredible writing!

Thank you for writing this. The transition from slave to sex partner was outstanding!

gotoguygotoguyalmost 11 years ago
Excellent Work

I love this story. This is the second time I have read it. It is well written, plausible (within the confines of its fictional space, of course :-). Just an all around good story.

Pleasure_LoverPleasure_Loverover 10 years ago
One word: Wow

Outstanding story! And good riddance to gay Tony. Wait, is that a reference to GTA? Though, I'll have to give it 4 stars because I absolutely hate gay scenes. I don't read lesbian ones either, but that's something else. But the humiliation "I" received was a real turn-on. And Amanda and Lori sound so sexy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

First off I did cum for this story.

I wish my introduction to cock sucking has been so gental. I was a slave for my step sister, She caught me dressed in her mothers bra and I had her panties over my head sucking on the padded part that rested on her pussy while I was masturbating. She took a couple pictures befor letting me know she had caught me. Well after that I was her slave and me made me eat her pussy and clean her ass in every position immaginable. She took to making me lay down in my fathers home office chair with my leggs up the back my hands tied to the arm rests and my head over on the seat. she would sit on me and make me eat her for hours as she surfed the net. Once in a while she would kerk me off and let my cum spray down on my face and open mouth. Well this one saturday morn after our parents left for the weekend she told me to assume the position and as she made me eat her I noticed a new taste. Latter as she started jacking me off she told me I had tasted her boyfriends cum from the night before. She made me cum and aimed my 3 in dick( no kidding, it is 3 inches when hard) at my mouth and told me to open up. After I came she just kelpt jacking untill I came again and she kept jacking untill I was begging her to stop. She slowed down and asked me what I would do for her if she stopped, I was crying now with pain and told her I was her slave and would do anything, just please stopjust then I started to bleed from my dick so she said OK anything right. I said oh please anything just stop. She let go of my hurting dick and walked to the door and said come in guys, To my horrer in walked the entire 1st string football team and the 2nd string which I played on. She said OK boys I prommised you would all get blow jobs, there is the mouth. I begged them not to so she walked over and slugged my nuts and started rubbing my limp dick, the pain was unbearable and I begged her to stop, I would do it. The first string quarter back was the first and he was brutal, he shoved his huge cock into me and as I was chocking and gaging he pumped away, just before I passed out he pulled out and slaped my face to revive me then back in he went. this kept up untill all the guys came in me at least once and some went at me more. My old best friend used me so many times and my sister let some of the first string fuck her and she would make me eat their cum from her as they watched. After that night there was no going back and as word of me spred about the school I became the school cock sucker to be used by any one who wanted me. If I even trtied saying no my sister would bring out the photoes and asked I she should show them to our parents. Now I look back on that first gang bang I think it was my best night. My sister and I still live close and now I am a willing cockold for her and clean her and her husband as often as possible. My sister has suggested bringing my wife on board and I told her if she could without ruining my marrage the go for it as you know best. I realy love her husbands huge cock and have learned to dress like a woman for him so when he fucks me he does not have to feel he is fucking a man. I suck him as a man to show my submission to him as I have been since the Saturday he first took my mouth and made me a cocksucker. If you have never tried it do so as it will tell you who you realy are. TaTa

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Well done!

This was great, the buildup and pay off were excellent! I would love to read more.

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