All Comments on 'Brother Learns Discipline'

Putting the BDSM stuff aside (not my cup of tea) it was an ejoyable read, I had quite a few laugh througout it all. It's always nice to sebling rivalry grow into lust and love, even more so when little sis takes it there on her own.

4*, BDSM cost you one.

Thank you for bringing us zinger -- plus one for the BDSM!

chapters- it was great

Excellent!

Many guys can benefit from proper training and discipline. Good results have been achieved by female family members using some of the techniques in this story.

Crap

What a pathetic guy. Not sure why someone would find this hot, but to each their own I guess...

Well developed. I enjoyed this tale. You ended in such a manner that a Chapter 2 could easily be written. I will read your other story next.

after this treatment ....

Would not be present at their sister's birthday , graduation or ....

Wedding .

Nice. Made me hard. Turned me on.

such a great build up. the ending was not what I expected from Rebecca. I reckon we could read another chapter about how bro and sis become lovers.

Great story! Thank you for writing it and posting here.

Good story...will miss not reading more

I was so hard on the last page.

Great story! Loved how her control of him made him love her more.

You know you made a great story when you come back to reread it to read it, and not to jerk off.

Better and different from the usual crap here but just one small point; does Rebecca not have periods? That seemed to have been forgotten about.

Yes, it was a different kind of story, some long parts but in the last of it everything melded together and wonderful things happened. I think the control by his sister has prepared him to be thoughtful to women and he has become a considerate lover. Another chapter, where he shows his sister love, softness and offers raw sex in the way her 2 friends received; is shared with her showing his total love for her. Hopefully, she'll allow it and accept it as his gift. Who knows, maybe they will do it more and more ?? I hope they share that emotion. Thank you !

Hope thats not your last in this so rare subgenre - incest femdom. With very sweet ending

I like your writing, a lot

This story is absolutely genius. I don't usually rate or comment but I had to.

Not only is it filled with many rich details, it has a certain goal which is fulfilled in the ending.

If the author is reading, I want to say this is true art.

Might be the best story I've read on this site, in any category. Thank you for sharing.

Best story ever.

We need the next part. This can't be over yet

If I had a sister like her she wouldn't have made it to her next goddamn birthday.

That being said. I liked the story the ending especially. Don't know if I can read it again tho she made me boil with rage. And if characters in a story can make me react like that Than I think it is very well written

There was an era when film stories depicted manliness as a matter of slapping a woman in the face, whereupon she would submit and adoringly fall in love. A theme that continues today where sexual force has, until recently, been seen as an allowable norm for a substantial number of men.

Crap

Best nut ever

best ever

Such attention too detail intensified the story.

get past the first half page. What a wuss....

This story just feels pretty different. Also there are so many questions left unanswered. A second part or just a small epilogue would have been great to know what happened after. Anyway I imagined an epilogue of my own.

4 🌟 for this only.

Yes.