All Comments on 'Brother, Sister Look Up Ch. 01'

what an excellent first story. I hope you will keep going with this. I would like to see where the relationship goes and hopefully they decide to be a couple.

Can't wait for the next chapter

Not may girls write stories like this and I really appreciate the female perspective on a story that is pretty hot to me. Looking forward to the next one...

Your skills as a writer are awesome!! Very Erotic To Boot!!

This is a very sexy, and enjoyable story! It is also relatively believable, for the most part, and thats a good thing. I look forward to reading part two!

My score would of been a 4 ... but the feces is a turn off for me.

Other than that ... story was awesome.

I actually quite enjoyed the thought of watching her poop and wiping her.