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All Comments on 'Brother Taboo Series: My Boss'

by LucyKim

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Another Disappointing Story

The grammar, sentence structure, and editing is so poor it takes away from the story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
you need an editor.

Not a bad story, but you really need a good editor to fix your grammatical errors and poor spelling, both of which detract from it.

redlion75redlion7511 months ago

Who the fuck is Jamie

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