All Comments on 'Brother Taboo Series: My Master'

What an ending that was. MORE, MORE, MORE PLEASE

Stop writing in present tense. It's just dumb.

I wanted to like this story more, but it desperately needed an editor. There are people on this site that will do it. Please look into that for future chapters. It was a decent start as far as story goes.

Definitely needs an edit. Good start. Dark brother or soft? Keep writing!

Needs more work

Can't wait to see how you take the story

Oh boy

This is the type of stories I’ve be searching for all these years on Literotica! It hits every single one of my messed up kinks and I love how the first and most important rule is not never be found out.. it makes everything all the more secretive and exciting. Also love how Henry cares about Laurie so so much that even though he’s jealous and wants to be possessive, he lets her free to do what she wants. He really is the ultimate Master.

Okay. That bit messed me up and I thoroughly enjoyed your story.

A weird story, good until the end. Did not like the end at all.

Scores 3/5

I expected her to be trans.