All Comments on 'Brother to Brother Ch. 08'

:D Oh. My. God.

I fucking love it.

I'm sad that it's over of course... but I look forward to more books by you in the future.

I find fraternal love stories such a turn on, so I persevered through this, but I have to admit it was tough going. You've received lots of positive feedback, and I don't mean to take away from that, but I just want to offer some suggestions:

1. Find a friend to read your dialogue back to you to help you make it more natural

2. Stick to a single tense during each scene

3. Consider finding a beta reader/editor

Good luck!

'As I felt his warm skin and his soft touch, I knew that this was all I ever needed.' Thank you Alpha for Carter, Aiden and their story. From your overall tone of the chapters, I thought you would end the brothers' tale in this fashion. I shall miss them. Well done.

You wrap up your love story so beautifully here that I cried. Carter has the soft and short hair on his chest that Aiden so lovingly kisses and caresses. They have good sized cocks that ache to be sucked, and then ache to fuck each other. They long to be together so much that they move into an apartment together, and spend their first evening on the living room rug giving themselves so completely to one another. The brothers' love story is believable, and so wonderfully written it takes the readers to great loving heights. It's a lovely, truly beautiful story. You've done a great job and made the readers very happy. All along I rooted for togetherness for these two loving brothers. Thank you for this demonstration of love.

Incest fraternal or not is a taboo in our society and this makes me feel that this is a true story and the disclaimer is there to keep the privacy of the brothers if I was going to do my story and I have a true story of gay incest that is how I would do it with the disclaimer change our names but keep the events as they were

I don't normally enjoy reading this genre but you wrote a pretty fine story. I'm a softie for happy endings and that's another reason why I liked this series. Five stars!

This series is thoroughly amazing; although there surprisingly were 2 small errors. You wrote back in the early chapters about one of the boys green eyes, but in another chapter about the same boy's blue eyes. Also, Aiden or Carter commented on the fact of their mother's desire for them both to be circumcised, but you wrote that Aiden "hung onto Carter's foreskin." sorry for any criticism. Amazing story; I'm glad to have found it. This was truly the best story I've read.

This is good!

Love love love this series!! Was wonderful. Just sad there will be no more

I love this story so much that at the end I was sad, sad for that it is the end of the story and that I wish I had that kind of love in my life. I hate to say this but my brother just raped me and left and to this day haunts me and gets in the way of me finding love or even being with a guy

A beautiful love story and soo hot !! Their sex really had me hard as stone !

One thing though - I don't mean to put your work down, but I would like to suggest you get some editing done - your work's worth it and it will add to its quality.

I loved the story and brother/brother love is a major turn-on for me.

Thanks for writing about it.

Everything must come to an end. But I'm so sad because this is the first long story i have read and enjoyed the most. Please please please make some more of these! Pleaseeeeeee im begging you! Its so perfect and everything. Im just really sad because it already ended . I wish there's book just like this that you can recommend to me? I will be soooo damn happy! Sorry for my bad english tho :) thankyou so much for this wonderful story sml<3

This was the best story I've ever read on the internet....the love between the two brothers was amazing and was sexy!! I loved it and couldn't stop reading...I'm about to read The last chapter and I'm excited to do so though it's late here in CA...almost 5 AM...made me stay up late, but it was all worth it. I wish I had a similar relationship between my brother and I ....wow! Brilliant job...keep writing...I wanna read more from you! That was an epic ending...I like their careers and their relationship ...everything about this story is top notch.

I have only just started reading brother/brother stories, but wow. That was simply incredible to read! 5 stars ever chapter, and definitely in my top three favourite stories ever read.

l am a female.

l love this whole series..I love aiden and Carter,, I want more chapters that will make aiden pregnant with Carter's child,,,plz don't give up with the series,,,we wemen love this kind of incest story Caz they make us fill with love,,,,I want to see aiden pregnant... plz....

Absolutely amazing! Loved every chapter, I hope there'll be a sequal!

Beautiful story! Thank you!

A superb telling of the unconditional love and camaraderieship shared between two brothers, and how the trail to temptation leads to the journey of a lifetime. Separated by the taboo line between sibling and soulmate, it's boundaries will soon be forever broken when the line is crossed, bringing brothers and lovers together as one...

This story needs to be on wattpad. One of the best ever of it's kind. Just a few things: I thought they were circumsized? And they should really use lube. See you on wattpad. My username: Caged Cross

I absolutely loved this story, it's probably the best of it's kind, maybe even the best romance I've ever read. I want to badly to have an open minded brother of my own that I could have something like this with.

I think this story was just about perfect. However, please pay attention to details and continuity. Sometimes the story became hard to read because wording was off. That being said, I had a hard time putting the story down. Fabulous job.

Loved the story. So taboo! Wish someone had proofread. Tons of mistakes, but great story.

This story is so very beautiful, so romantic between two soulmates. This is one of the best incest stories I have ever read. Wonderful job!!

This is an absolutly beautifully written love story. This is the best incest story I have ever read. Well done!!!