All Comments on 'Brother Wolves Ch. 03'

But whoever edited for you needs to be fired hehe

Good Morning, IRTR.. Good Chapter..Can't wait to get to Scotland. :)

Not surprised that Mindy carried on like she did for so long. It seems like the Alpha didn't really make a point to order her to behave any differently.

I think you again posted unedited chapter, the story line is great but I had to reread over parts guessing words. A good editor would do wonders

I wish I could give 5 stars. It's what the story deserves. But the poor editing and incorrect wording makes it hard to read. Please find an editor who can actually edit.

that Mindy is human. When Suni confronted her she used the term 'husband'.

Also the following quote: "What Suni did not know was that several of the women at Rayan's office were pack members."

I don't know how editing and posting works on this site, but maybe save your unedited story as a Draft (in the filename) to prevent some of the editing/posting issues detracting from your Wonderful storyline.

Love your stories but the editing needs to be better I have a hard time reading these please please work on that or maybe let me edit them or something

I love this story, but you really need an editor!!! 😀😬😬😃