All Comments on 'Brother's Dick: A Virginity Lost'

I hope to see all 3 stories. Really looking forward to caught by mom.

Damn i enjoyed this one a lot, and now there are 3 (or more) stories to look forward to. Just keeping y fingers crossed that mom won't loose her shit when she catches them :)

5* with ease!

Yes this was a good story as usual. Yes you have good followups planned as usual. Yes you have another story with great potential as usual. But at some point you need to actually use these potential followups and finish them up. Or at least move them along some. How long has backseat mom been sitting? Or how about kinky tales? We LOVE your stories but could at some point start to progress some of them? Sometimes we need more than a season ending cliffhanger. Thanks.

Love your stories, I check almost everyday for new updates. Thanks!

To 'seeing a pattern'

I try to write sequels based on requests from readers. For example there have been six parts to Backseat Mommy...and three to kinky tales (but neither of the most recent parts have the same comments or requests as earlier parts).

To be truthful, nay story that gets a 100 comments or a lot of email requests is where I try to go... thus why 'A Sister Surprise' has a sequel already written and in editing, even though I didn't leave suggestions for that one, but it got tons of comments.

Bride submission I had given up on as the reds and scores were lower than my norm, yet I get the most requests for that series, thus after 2 years I juts released part 3, which also isn't doing overalls well.

My point is, writing sequels is more difficult and thus I pick and choose.... plus inbetweeen my contest entries and new ideas....

Thanks jasmine

Liked it as I do most of you writing. Just not as good as J & J Twins but very close. Maybe your follow ups will move higher.

You Keep Writing And I'll Keep Reading !!! Another 5

I just LOVE your stories!! You have such a creative mind, (from experience?) that it gets me tingly all over until I have to enjoy some self love in order to finish the story. *sigh* Please keep writing!

An interesting story ...

In particular, I consider that for other following chapters, the story could be continued with the options that the author succeeds, first: Addicted to Cock

In the following chapter: Anal Exploration

And continue with: Caught by Mom and she join us.

Anyway, I do not want to put pressure on the author (not too much, at least).

I give you 5* and waiting more chapters.

I apologize for my English (yet), is not my native language.

5 stars! Build up was great and finish gave definitive proof of more to comu.

I always check th profile of authors I read. Easy to see why you love stockins...you look sexy in them.

Lee2012

I'd honestly say do all of the follow ups as I really enjoyed this, but if I had to pick one it would be the first, addicted to cock. Great sorry, as always.

I'm a big anal fan so I vote the next one be anal training, please. Also, I loved this story, such a great tale of discovery and exploration!

really a lovly licky dicky.

and again as the Eagle fly's giving two talons up.

It's a "hard candy Christmas."

as Dolly would sing.

This was a great story I loved her slowly building up throughout the story it made it feel more believable and I just loved the story throughout please add the new additions as soon as possible

Start with anal, followed by addiction to cock, followed by caught by mom…seems a natural progression to me…could also flip flip the first two…

I don't agree with everything but the story picks up in the middle and ends great..just like sex

Great story can't wait for the follow up, it's hard to pick one follow up wish you could do all of them :-)

Another great story by my favorite author. Glad she found her true self and became the submissive cocksucker for her brother. Can\t wait for the sequels to this story

Yet another superb tale by the master. I agree with the others... write all three sequels.

Story it move along very nicely, however are you still virgin if you popped your cherry? having a real cock for the first time "yes" but no hymen.

She better get on birth control so she can feel the joy of having him cum inside her.

For me you can skip the Anal and go right to mom finding them.

A great story by a gifted writer. I look forward to your other renditions on this theme.

I will certainly recommend your stories.

All of the above, with mom joining the siblings in their incestuous behavior in that last story. Please....

Oh my god just love your stories, so fucking hot, this took my girl friend and I to insane levels of pleasure that caused us to pass out for a couple of minutes. As soon as we came round we did it over again, the intense and insane pleasure was so fucking crazy we passed out for nearly 20 mins. We now both want to find a virgin cunt and virgin cock toplaythis out with, so hedonistically depraved. 10 stars. Cunt lapping sex maniac uk.

Please write more

All follow-ups please and then some more!

At last, after more than 2,000years - for all the women the world over - specific, step-by-step instructions on how to masturbate. Beautiful, fabulous ! Jaz, another five star contest winner for sure, Now, how about a story prefaced with similar jerk-off instructions for men. I know... I know... but if anyone can do it, you can. Love your shiny silk stockings.

Jack Auff

I loved like them all so write them all

Great story, pkease write more. Then to add chance mom finds out

As always your stories are well written and vivid please continue this thread

You have done it again! Excellent background, fun build up, and more than sexually exciting climax (yes, i went there). More please.😆

Love your story very well written would love to read all three follow ups

Excellent! and, this is from a guy who doesn't usually go for incest stories. :-)

I thoroughly enjoyed this story. Very well written. I look forward to reading the sequels. Thank you!

This story is amazing, just amazing.

great story

As always your stories are the best.

SSL - as I have said many times before, your stories are always a first class raving success!!! My poor cock almost didn't make it alive through this one - and me being an only child - explains the reason why I had to stop reading three times to clean up my cumshots!! I actually fantasized this kind of thing when I was about fourteen years old.

FUCK, young lady, you must be the best fuck who ever lived to be able to write this stuff - presumably from experience - and believe me, I would LOVE to experience some of this kind of fucking with you1

Great Christmas Story. Really gets you into the holiday spirit. For the next part have them caught by mom coming home early and the father coming home the next day so it gives mom some time to spend some personal time with her kids. Then at the end hint that after the holiday break is over she's gonna make more of her fantasize a reality, like her basically becoming a slut for her schools teams to use.

Great story from veggies to delight

You are truly a gifted writer of erotica. I enjoy all of your stories and rate this in the top 5. Truly one of your very best works.

i absolutely loved it! i cant wait to read the follow up!

Shallow with no sense of how to build a character, or a story for that matter.

This one is good for those who want to be told how to jerk off without the worry of content.

Just jump in for instant gratification. Because it ain't close to real world.

Looking forward to those three potential additions and others...very enjoyable read. Thank you and thank you for sharing.

The story doesnt take place in the 1950s... she simply dresses like a girl from the 50s.

Anal next please!!! And make her into a real slut also, fucking multiple guys.

Not bad, any of the ideas that you decide to expand would be welcomed. I'm curious to see what you choose?

Hey good start. Mom definitely needs to catch them in the act. The possibilities are endless

Thanks for the awesome story! I hope mom catches her getting fucked in the ass. I'd love to have her end up under her daughter sucking cunt and cock alternately as he fucks between his sisters ass and cunt and his mom's mouth.

It's a good start for sure. I'm not sure that bringing in the mother is a good idea, but any new chapter will be welcomed!

Especially the mother who is going to catch big brother and little sister doing things that excite her and she has never been exposed to. Her minister husband only does missionary position and only when he wants to make a baby. She has never sucked a cock or been fucked doggy style or cowboy or reverse cowboy, or eaten pussy or been rimmed or had her asshole reamed by a hard cock. She has never had a vibrator to use to give an orgasm that she has never experienced. Especially orgasm, after orgasm, after orgasm, after orgasm... Little sister and brother could give a good education to the ministers wife.

Oh well, what do I know... just sayin'.

All three of your suggestions sounds very, very enticing to me I'd really like to read all three scenerios Go, man go!!

What IS it with so damned many authors writing sex stories without even knowing the very basics of anatomy! The hymen is at the ENTRANCE to the vagina. If she had been using three fingers (hell, two prolly) then she would have gotten rid of that pesky hymen a long time before! ...so if she has blood coning out after that cucumber, she has bigger problems, rofl!!

Man, that 12" suction cup dildo!

Maybe it's weird thinking, or guy thinking, but why the hell would she want to use something so fucking big?! I mean, when she gets around to fucking a real, live dick for the first time and 'losing her virginity' (whatever that really means at this point, rofl;) she is going to be so disappointed. For life. Damn.

"Open your throat as if you're yawning and breathe through your nose,"

Huh? I dont get that one. My throat isn't open when I yawn, my airway is. Can't breathe through both at once. Hell, can't breathe through my nose when Im swallowing either, lol.

Anyways, LoVeD the story, all things considered! Gotta say though, they must make everything bigger in that family, bigger dick, bigger pussy, rofl! I'm not huge but I can bottom out in my wife if I'm pounding her hard. No way she could get a coke bottle in her pussy though! I'm pretty thick for my length and I have to have her pretty wet and work our way in until she dilates a bit. She'd be screaming in pain trying to get a coke bottle up there, lol. She'd definitely have to have a c-section if she got pregnant, she'd tear bad for sure!

I read these stories about big guys just ramming three fingers in and going to town like it's nothing and the girl is great with it. I can't imagine fucking something that loose!

Once again I compliment you on one of your stories. This is your story you tell it like it makes sense to you. I actually appreciated the buildup to the best parts. Like foreplay with anticipation. :)

disappoint. Always well written and always hot as hell.

read your story because a friend recommended you, thank god she did. I will thank her properly with a good tongue lashing .After all she is my half sister its the proper thing to do .

Think I would have lightning fast pulled my cock out of her mouth, spun little sister back around, pinned her wrists above her head and buried my throbbing cock in her tight pussy, pounding away till I started to cum, then holding it deep against her cervix, spraying my brother seed deep into her womb, coating her walls, filling her up and maybe, just maybe...

OMG, this reminds me so much of having taboo sex play with my older brother. I'd tease him by sitting opposite him after I showered with just a towel wrap so he could see my pussy. I could see his big boner rising in his pants and I asked him to show it to me. Next thing I knew he was fingering my wet virgin pussy, and I had a tight grip around his big girthy shaft. I obliged when he asked me to suck his big cut cock. The head was so huge that I could bare get my small mouth around it. He fingered me to orgasm then wanted to fuck me badly, but his big thick cock hurt too much so he only went in head-deep, then said he had to bust his nut. He pulled out and jacked his cum spurts all over me! It was pretty erotic.

Amazing story! A bit heavy on the brother/sister stuff. But great writing. You have a talent. !

Good one. It’s always the religious one’s that go nuts making up for lost time once they realize what a crock of crap the hypocrisy of the church truly is.To wit..see any online or newspaper story about the butt banging priests that permeate the church..

To the anonymous anal pore that claims he would have tried to impregnate his sister…..and I would have loved to be there when your preacher father castrated you!

YOU NEVER PUT SEED IN ANY WOMAN THAT DOES NOT EXPLICITLY SAY SHE WANTS IT!

What kind of sub human single cell life form would repay the gift of beautiful love and wonderful sex with a forced pregnancy?! My guess is you are totally scared of women and this fantasy domination is all your little mind can come up with to allay those fears.

I could easily cuss you for another hour but point has been made. Women deserve to be treated with respect. And forcing child bearing is the polar opposite.

Hot!!!

Entertaining, but not the best story that I've read here. 4/5

Another person commented below:

What IS it with so damned many authors writing sex stories without even knowing the very basics of anatomy! The hymen is at the ENTRANCE to the vagina. If she had been using three fingers (hell, two prolly) then she would have gotten rid of that pesky hymen a long time before!

THANK YOU!!!! I have often wondered the same thing myself. Thanks for bringing the correct information to light.

I have an ex girlfriend who originally claimed to me that I was her second time ever and her second lover. She later confessed to the lie when she saw me pouting about coming so close to being her first. She hated using pads during her periods and had been using tampons for years. She had damaged herself more than once removing the tampon so that her hymen was gone. She was technically a virgin and I was her first even though I didn't pop the cherry. We dated for 18 months before she got stupid. She met a guy whose family had lots of money and broke up with me to be with him. It didn't last more than 3 months and he dumped her. She wanted me back but I told her that she had broken faith with me. I'm nothing if not rabidly loyal. I expect the same thing from everyone around me. I sometimes regret not taking her back because she has always been the second best lay I ever had. If she had been bisexual like my second wife was, she would have cinched the first place spot.

Ruined by pulling out

I enjoyed this story. The early part was excitingly dull, but it got interesting as they got laid together. Happy Christmas!