Maybe don't say "as his orgasm died" but "as his orgasm was/slowly/ dying" if mentioning it at all. Idk. I'm horny, I'm reading and among the first things about orgasm I learn is that it died. And I don't like it
I go by Jack. I'm terribly unreliable with posting and should not be counted on for any updates, ever. If you're still with me after all this time, you must be a masochist. I'm glad to know I'm among friends.