All Comments on 'Brothers Return Ch. 02'

your stories need to be longer and closer together these two chapters should have been posted as one don't rush what you post as a three chapter series should be a three page chapter don't waste the readers time if it is a one chapter story fine but if it's longer then make longer chapters

I liked your descriptions of their lust and foreplay. You can add more detail and extend the pleasure they have with eachother. Keep it up.

I love this series.. keep 'em cumin; ;)