All Comments on 'Brought Down to Serve Pt. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Female boss

As a businesswoman I admit getting to boss around a male assistant can be wicked fun

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Far too wordy.

Lost interest about halfway through. Good concept, but way too much filler.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

I hope Olly's going to have his ass violated - that would be hot.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
SPH perfection

Best SPH story I've ever read, love seeing him slowly lose his power. :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Good for Tessa

I am happy cute little Tessa managed to make the arrogant male submit. Stripping his job from him was a great way to kill off his ego. I guess he’s utterly dependent on the women he scorned now hehe

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

very nice story. continue please

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
man running the place okay

o.O girls become twat when on chair, stay in kitchen, olly bring asshole claire to knees

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
in a way i wish it was me

Thru a bit of luck, i have found myself at the head of a rather large company.

im rock hard after reading this story. i know i am a tru sub, thank you for such a wonderful story, you are very talented.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
MORE PLEASE

This is so hot. More please. Especially Tessa.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Tessa

I love Tessa what a power move! She'll be in charge in no time :D

0ra11yfix8ed0ra11yfix8edover 7 years ago
Curious

It looks like there will (or should be) conflict between Sophie and Tessa. I can't imagine that Sophie will take this betrayal of her trust lying down. It is one thing to shame and humiliate poor Oliver but to undermine her financial support won't go well.

spikedlockedspikedlockedover 7 years ago
great story

I love how Olly is slowly brought down to serve! and i love how women take everything away from him, from his cock and dignity to his job and take their rightful place above worthless males

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Excellent

Intrigued by Hilary and would love to see more of her.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
please continue

is there any way that you continue this great story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
oh dear

just another inadequate male author writing his sad fantasies of being walked over by women.

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