All Comments on 'Brown Coffee'

Beautifull written hot anal story!

a sequel would be nice

Damn nice start to a writing career. Keep writing. Love to hear about when she comes to his hotel.

God damn. So fucking hot. Public anal... That's on the to do list for me

Nice read! Good sex, likeable characters - just what I like in a story!

Great job, hit a lot of beats that work for me. I'm looking forward to your future work

You described your male character as if he looked like Where's Waldo.

You described your female character as if she looked like the bumble bee from Blind Melon's "No Rain."

I couldn't stop cracking up when they started having awkward sex with weird dialogue. My ribs are actually sore from it. So, Thanx.

I was going to start my comment with “goddamn,” and then I realized someone else beat me to the punch.

But you know what? Fuck it. Goddamn, that’s some fun literary porn. Hands down, it’s the best Moby Dick-themed porn I’ve ever read.

(What’s that? “Have you ever read any other Moby Dick-themed porn,” you ask? Go fuck yourself.)

This story is a blast from start to finish. Well done.

Definitely one of my favorite stories - fun and hot!