- Incest/Taboo
- Brown Lust Ch. 02
- Comments
All Comments on 'Brown Lust Ch. 02'
by Blogger007
- 38 Comments
sneakymoe_knee_keyabout 16 years agoI have a passion for anything Indian. The story is well written but I must say the switching from calling Mira by her name and by Mrs.Llal gets a bit confusing. I suggest picking one name for each character and sticking with it. The other thing that bothered me was that in the first chapter we got to see the thoughts and feelings of those watching but that got lost this chapter. You started out showing us but once Vikram (my friends name as well) calmed his cousin down we hear nothing of them until the end. You have done a good job setting this story up to go many directions and I look forward to where it might lead. My one last note is simple I find many writers including professional writers take several paragraphs to describe something that was made clear to me in the first. To me it gets a little redundant. I am sure this is just a personal choice as I am very straight forward and blunt in real life as well as in my own writing. My thought after awhile is they are trying to put filler in because they cant think of anything else to say. Over all I loved your story and look forward to further chapters.
Anonymousabout 16 years agoLiked it, but didn't like the fact that the wife was treated so badly. Also would have liked more sex; as the boys and girls getting it on.
Anonymousalmost 16 years agoI thought it was awesome. Although i would have enjoyed the kids getting in on their own action, I assume that if there is a next installment, that will occur. I look VERY forward to the next installment! Very good work!
Anonymousalmost 14 years agoI really enjoyed the story. I'd love to hear more. You started with a really complexed situation. Some are angry some are confused, hurt, lustful. It's a complexed situation I'd like to see resolved. Just keep dad from the little girls.
Anonymousabout 13 years agoContinue the story.. I want to see Vikram end up with his mom obviously...
Anonymousabout 13 years agoplease include a whole family scene and i mean whole family aunts uncles older sister dad mother everyone
there aint any good pakistani indian incest story like that yours is good so pleaaaaaaaase
and do it quiiiiiiiiick na
Sanjay1960about 13 years agoI lovd the storyline. Appreciate very much if you would take this up further. There is so much that you can do that I am most eagerly waiting to read them
Keep up the good work
Anonymousabout 12 years agocontinue the story I want to see vickram sonia vinod and rani in the next one.
Anonymousover 11 years agoIt was great don't forget the power to revenge I liked that even more.
Anonymousover 11 years agoThe scene with the two gorgeous cousins playfully toweling each other off and squeezing and feeling each other up by the pool is one of the fucking sexiest things I've ever read and everytime I get to it I blow a load. No jokes. Plus when the two sisters are tempting their brothers in the swimming pool is really hot as well.
Anonymousover 11 years agoThere's not enough stories about exotic dark skinned girls like Rani on this site but you really know how to write one. She is fucking sexy and a total babe and I would LOVE it if you wrote more about exotic dark girls because they are fucking hot!
Anonymousover 11 years agoIt was a huge taboo and betrayal of trust on the sister in law's part to accept that someone else was better than her late husband. It both, upset and turned me on at the same time. Well written.
Anonymousabout 11 years agoIt was really hot how Mr. Dutt slowly seduced his sister in law before fucking her and made her admit she loved it. Damn that was hot!
Bfreetorunover 10 years agoAnd you have been confused, what are they, American Indians, Canadians, Indians that speak Hindu and wear clothing similar to the Indians from India??? WTF? But a good story, never the less.
Anonymousalmost 10 years agoLooking forward to a continuation with Mr. Rishik getting his due.
Anonymousover 9 years agoid like like the father to get whacked,killed, paralyzed,and any other terrible thing happen to him
kinkydreams667over 8 years agoI hope Vikky gets to fuck aunt Mira soon and caught by his mom...great story, need to ease loads on my Balls..
Looking for more buddy
Anonymousover 7 years agoWhere's next chapter....
Fantastic and very hot.
Problem with Indian authors is they don't give next chapter in time
Anonymousabout 7 years agoPlease get sonia involved in sexual exchanges more.....she seems much real and arousing!! Overall great one brother
Anonymousabout 6 years agoThe story is really amazing! The sex, the incest, the foreplay! Everything is amazing. Also I would love to see mom-son incest in the next chapter
Anonymousabout 5 years agoPlease continue with incest and especially what the kids do with each other
Anonymousabout 5 years agoGood job.. please continue. I would like to see how does mala ends up pissing in her kids mouth
koolme98over 4 years agoHot! The turmoil between lust and love is so very well narrated. Keep up the amazing work.
Aussie19514 months agoWhat a waste of fucking time reading this story, as usual, another author that doesn’t finish what they started. It’s a pity because it had the makings of a great story.
Anonymous3 months agobeautiful, the balance between pain and pleasure was off the hook. continue chapter 3 plsss
