All Comments on 'Brownwood: I Dreamed Ch. 01'

Please don't rush this

Very good start, lots of directions you can go with this story.

DG

the bane of all young adults. TK U MLJ LV NV

An interesting situation and fascinating characters. As in all of your stories.

It's tough not to listen to your heart, but as soon as she wanted to date others when they started college, the writing was on the wall. She was the good time had by all. She was not marrying material.

Zach still needs to grow a pair. Not liking any of these characters

Don't bother reading any further. It turns into a WACC reconciliation railway, where he naturally comes to understand why everything was really all his fault, and he's the one who needs to apologise and take a knee.

Author says it's a "dark romance" and it's posted here in the ROMANCE section and some readers are surprised there's a reconcilliation? Really? Almost all romance stories on here have a HEA (Happy Ever After) ending!

Thought it was good and well written. Definately had that dark Loving Wives flavour about it though.

If she even TRIES to talk to him, he should tell her, "Stay away from me, you CUNT!"

was twenty two. Zach was twelve!!

No college guy would bother with a flighty party girl. He just move on to some other coed. 3*

Good writing but Bree truly isn't worth shit.

She is just a disgusting cock whore cheating cunt.

Trash should be thrown out not wept over.

"I just wanna party all the time and drink like hell," besides being terribly immature, meant Bree did not share his wants and values. She's entitled to her own, stupid and childish as may be, but they don't match his. Split the fuck up already.

Even if you want to throw some of the blame on their fight, she proved that his reasoning for not going to the party was right on!

If you don't like wimpy guys who take back bitchy cheaters and have no self-respect, stop reading now.

Get them back together, with some excuse about the past.

But Bree is a slut. No two ways about it. When someone 'Wants to date other people, because I've never been with anyone else', they are a pussyhound, or a slut.

All the excuses about insecurity and jealosy are just that. Excuses. People only get jealous when someone gives them a reason to make them jealous. You'll notice Bree never got jealous, because Zach never gave her a reason to.

Now that she's gotten her fill,(literally), and is bored with fucking anyone that interests her, she'll be back, full of false apologies, looking for a safety net, and gullible Zach will take her back. How romantic.

DFWBeast wimpy side I guess. The writing is good but the story is worth shit. A horrible and unbelievable RAAC. Nothing really good to say about the plot, the characters, etc, etc expcet that DFW tried to sell a huge load of crap. I'm not buying. A story worth of Matt Moreau

This is a poor imitation of Second Chance by S-Des. It is clear that Bree has tremendous guilt and shame after what happened that fateful night. But what is not realistic is that she would be with Ty again let alone get engaged to him after what happened and what we learn later. And yes Zach was right about the sharks. I could see them being friends again but no way that they reconcile to be lovers. Yes in a perfect world where he would come to learn 100% accurately everything she felt and said that led her down the path and afterwards, well maybe. But that is impossible. It I crafted much less dark and twisted in Second Chance and is a much more believable and excellent reconciliation

This guy is literally a chick and the chick is acting just like a guy. Except this so called guy is a fucking needy codependent little bitch 😂😂😂

slightly confused...

Wow, this is an epic story. Well crafted emotional characters, real situations. Powerful and engaging. I don't like the choices sometimes, but, man, this is a good read.