All Comments on 'Brownwood: Tommy Boy Ch. 03'

Enjoying the series so far thx

Really liked this story. It was sweet and somewhat unexpected compared to the previous installments of this series. It was a good switch up.

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Adding to the "boob thing". So, my wife has enormous boobs - she's a professional adult model. When you read a bra size, "40DD" the number is the band size, or the circumference around the chest, not the boobs. The letter is the cup size, or the volume of the boobs (their actual size). A woman with a 40DD chest has a big "chest" (not just boobs). My wife is thin, she wears a 32M bra. That is, her chest under the boobs is 32 inches around (pretty average for a fit woman) and her cup size is M, which is basically unheard of (and entirely thanks to science and technology). Imagine a 5'8" blonde, about 150lbs, of which 12lbs is basically breast implants. Obviously, I don't hate implants like some people do (handle might give it away) but for anyone who is curious or in the know, each one is 2500cc of volume - just to give you an idea, the "normal" maximum size for an implant is 800cc, or your "double d". She had to have repeated visits to a specialist surgeon in the united states to get to her current size (and in fact, she just got home a couple days ago with her 5th set of implants). Also, women do upsize and downsize breast implants all the time, but if you downsize significantly, you'll need a breast lift to get rid of the extra skin.

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Also, as an aside - while I don't have Tommy's insecurities over a cheating ex-wife, I would also say that despite my wife being a walking, talking advertisement for sex, in the last 16 years I can probably count on one hand the number of times guys have approached her (although, to be fair, one of those guys was a B list pop star at a concert we were at). To put it bluntly, only in LW fiction are towns populated with men who have the balls to approach a woman that looks like my wife. Typically it's actually couples that come up.. and ask for selfies. although recently we did have this soccer mom looking woman come up to us and say, "Wow! My husband follows you on Instagram!"- she wanted to talk to her about getting breast implants, so there is that. So, on the whole, I think in "real life" being married to a huge tittied exhibitionst that has probably thousands of pieces of content on the internet and in magazines isn't really as big of a deal as some authors might imagine. Most guys are frankly, way too sheepish to "shoot their shot", even when she's alone and it practically never happens when I am there. Not good for the story I guess, but that's been my "real life" experience over the last decade and a half of marriage (and no, I don't look like a terrifying biker, or a super model myself - I'm probably more average Joe than Tommy is)

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Anyway, back to the story - I loved it. It was great. All of the characters were endearing. I think you made Angie the right combination of mixed signals, enough so that at various parts of the story, you kind of disliked her because it was obvious that Tommy was falling for her and Erica. I really hated and both enjoyed that part of the story, so well done. A solid 5/5 from me.

Sorry Slam, removing implants and possibly replacing them with smaller implants is not all that big of a deal.

I was a singer in a rock band in college. I had my share of every size of boob from mere nipples to triple D’s, often two or three sets a day. (Interestingly the girls with the smallest boobs got turned on the most by boob play, go figure.) There is a large and noticeable difference between DD’s and C’s, especially if the body is trim and fit. Still that wasn’t even a key part of the story so I’m not sure why you fixated on it. Maybe you didn’t have the benefit (or curse) of the experiences I had in college.

⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ Now that’s a love story!!!

Thoroughly enjoyable and well written series. Great characters which had their flaws and their strengths. Really worth a read fir anyone who likes a feel good story. BardnotBard

A thoroughly enjoyable roller-coaster!

DD boobs are not big and would never require any sort of breast reduction surgery. Perhaps if they were J cups or larger then maybe, but a reduction from DD to C isn’t that large of a change and seems rather pointless. I’m convinced you don’t really understand cup size in women.

Further, I’d never want any woman to get breast reduction surgery. It’s nothing like getting implants, it’s a risky and invasive surgery that will come with large scars that cannot be hidden. Women should only get breast reduction if there is a medical need for one. Pure vanity like this? That’s incredibly stupid. Why give yourself huge scars in a surgery that comes with a high risk of infection?

That he acted completely okay with it without doing any research or offering any resistance tells me he’s a complete idiot and just follows whatever his wife tells him to do. He’s not looking out for her at all.

What a story. Thanks Beast.

Always love when the good guy gets the girl...

Another good one in this series, you drew it along very well,

Auto correct sucks.. it took.. you did good., As always. Thanks

Tried to give you a five. But this Blake thing ain't working I guess... So take a

10 instead.. 👍👍🙄😉👌✌️🤠

Really hit the sweet spot...5

"Brownwood" is an outstanding series of stories, each one very well written and told. I do hope that you will continue with this series and tell more of the stories of the wonderful people of Brownwood..........():\

Damn, this chapter was awesome, a great description of his insecurities, very well done

Great story! 5 stars

Being a large guy, no self esteem, married to a gorgeous attractive vivacious strong woman, this story particularly struck a chord with me.

Simon_M

Amazing story!

Beautiful and wonderful story. I really appreciate it. Enjoy reading the story from beginning till the end. Definitely a five star 🌟✨🌟✨🌟✨🌟✨🌟

Kept my attention from beginning to end! The characters were vivid and well-defined, and the plot was well-thought-out, with great continuity. Unlike many stories in this genre, this tale was more restrained in its erotica, which, in my mind, made it more believable. On the other hand, it is a fantasy with all the tricks that are normally used to make a point. Well done on all counts, I thoroughly enjoyed the work and gave it 5 stars.

Tom wasn't a cuckold but he was a fucking wimp or simp or whatever the opposite of a heterosexual male is. And yes real men don't go around ceding agency in their own lives to fucking random women. This guy is about as aimless as a headless chicken and you no what women don't like listless aimless men. As much as they love the whole we don't need no Man narrative they still find themselves to men who can provide for them and their children.

Personally this is a cuck story except instead a of a guy cucking Tom it's Angie. This fucking cunt bullied and coerced this guy from the moment she met him that's why I hate this story.

Cuckold Bitch Wimp SIMP all of the above

Great story. I only found disappointment in the lack of karma for Susie, Rob & Marcus. Sorry, but I'm a strong believer in payback. Excluding more of his original divorce part of the story in part 1 would have helped. I still gave it a 5.

Great story, which is now several years old. To reference Angie as a whore is so misunderstanding and judgmental. While her indiscretion was misguided, her husband's secretive actions were as well. They were both very young. She acknowledged her mistake, attempted to address it, but she was rebuked. Thereafter, there was not a singular instance of unfaithfulness or infidelity. A loving mother, a caring friend who safeguarded everything she cared for.

2 torn souls who were blessed to find one another. Great story.

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Very simple comment; It was a great story, with a very satisfying ending.

Great story. Was a nice romance between the MC and Angie. I just don't get the critics about the MC being a cuck. How was he supposed to handle Leah differently after Susie spilled the beans? He tossed her out and divorced her and got a new place. He needed motivation. He got it in an unusual way. Out of that grew friendship, then love, then marriage. So what if Angie didn't arrive at it at the same time. She had her defenses up for a long time. The author made it crystal clear the only way to Angie's heart was to be safe, to be honorable and to be a friend to her and Erica. There was no other path to her heart. Period.

Great story - very well written and developed. Didn’t want it to end but that’s the hallmark of a great story!

I suppose ther really are male dipshits like this , ones that have no self esteem,cannot think without their zipper being involved, and are basically out of control most of the time when in the company of attractive women. I have not met many , if any at all. Men who are willing to subject themselves to torture and abuse, oh wait, those are the increasingly popular and common cucks, a phenomenon that is skyrocketing as we have yet another generation , the fourth or fifth in a row, with lower t scores than the previous. Nice writing but civilization would be a chaotic shambles if the Mc in this yarn was normal.

ANGIE WAS A WHORE AND STILL HAS THE WHORE TENDENCIES HENCE SHE CAN DISPLAY HERSELF SO OPENLY!! IT IS MORE THAN JEALOUSY. ONCE A CHEAT ALWAYS A CHEAT

Enjoyed this story. Well written

Kept me guessing,that is good writing. I will read more of your stories.

This was without a doubt the dest story I have read on this site

I read this story a while back and thoroughly enjoyed it. I decided to read it a second time and appreciated it much more. I like your insight into relationships and I agree with the points you present in your story. It is a great way to develop a romance and I have edited a few. Thank you for this piece of writing. K

Theirs only one way to look at this story...It's a wonderful Love Story...and I'm a sucker for a beautiful love story......Right......

One of the best I've read in a long time on the site. I found myself enticed to not skip ahead to the ending. Thank you for writing a great short story.

I really enjoyed your story. Thank you.

This was so written by a woman view on how a guy would behave in the situation s described. It would have been more realistic if the guy had got pissed at the strip offer section and told her to say he wants a real girlfriend and to let him know if she's interested and then walk out.

Absolutely great series of stories. It's a rare LW story where you find both the male and female lead characters are so likable. Good won out over evil in this one, and I loved it.

Some particularly moving moments especially in this third chapter. Enjoyed it immensely. 5 stars.

Like your stories. Far surpasses those longing winded stories with not much to say and takes forever to say them, which I quit reading.

I've truly enjoyed all of your Brownwood stories. What is below is just one example of your fine writing skill.

I'm not sure what a mouse feels as it is slowly swallowed by a snake. I suspect it's a combination of many things: the thrill of the sudden rush of adrenalin, the terror of realizing its life, as it knew it, was about to end, and the overwhelming physical sensation of being crushed by undulating rings of muscles as it's pulled deep inside the snake.

This was a long story about love...and I'm happy to say...Humour is very much a part of the story...it was a lot of fun reading this story...when a story makes you laugh...it's better than good...it's Great............

Nice story,though could have had the same result in a lot fewer words.

Of a nice guy been the last lover of the woman of his dreams.

Thanks for the memories. This was a well done story of building relationships in spite of individuals` histories and concentrating on their mutual shared interests.

I'll admit, there were times I was trying to figure out who Tommy Boy would ultimately end up with even though I was pretty sure it was going to be her. There was a while that I couldn't figure out if he would end up back with Leah, or God forbid, Susie, Tara, Angie or someone yet to be named.

And by the way, Lzzy and Halestorm are a very underrated band and have been for years. All they need is one breakout Album with 3 or 4 hits on it and they will skyrocket. I remember hearing about them when they were still a Regional Band in Pennsylvania.

And yes, "I Get Off" is a wonderful song for a stripper especially doing a lap dance.

This was a great series, thanks.

And then you are gone? Come on now, San Antonio isn't that far from The Big D, hang out, meet Longhorn--07. If you fly and park your car just remember which color train you rode in on.

The song that came to my mind reading this was Dr. Hooks' "When You're In Love With A Beautiful Woman". As the saying goes; been there, done that. Glad to see that's not going to be a problem for them much anymore.

"Well," I said loudly, "I can't believe anyone would knowingly talk shit about a woman in front of the man who loves her. Nobody's that damn stupid!" I've met a few and I still think he should have given Eric the second punch.

Not sure how much of this and other stories are your true personality and how much is fiction, but if this is really truly you then Beauty must be quite a lucky lady. It's only been about two years but you are welcome back anytime. Now I still have a couple of more Brownwood's to go. Signed: BTW

Special brownie points for adding Halestorm, who I've seen 4 times in the last 12 months. LOL

IT WAS A VERY GOOD STORY. THANX

A beautiful and touching story. I truly enjoyed reading it. Yes, as most of males fantasies, it requieres to suspend belief in certain points, but it was a well told story.

Then only thing I see a problem is with her exhibitionism. I don't think the problem is Tommy Boy being insecure. I wouldn't like my wife teasing other guys to get herself excited. Her need to draw male attention flashing her pussy or her tits is the kind of thing that can easily destroy a relationship. The fact that he accepted her teasing ways with others it was a huge step back in the way you portrayerd Tommy Boy.

To be honest, if this wasn't a story, I wouldn't bet on them long term if she doesn't change.

Really enjoyed all the Brownwood: Tommy Boy excellent read.

Its one of the types of stories i have been looking for.

And i like to thank all the people that helped with the story.

Thanks for the story and for the 'heads up' on Halestorm. I now have an addition to my list of favourite bands.

Loved the entire Brownwood series and hope there will be more. This particular series, "Tommy Boy", rings especially true for me. Because I am the ogre and my amazingly stunning wife was once a signed bikini model California beach girl. We became friends and fell in love. 20 years later we still are very much in love and making every day a special one. Thank you for telling my story!!!

I can't immerse myself in this story any more than I can immerse myself into 50 Shades of Gray style fantasies.

I don't viscerally believe in my heart that Ms. TOS would throw over a Daniel...or that there are not sufficient 'good' non-loser guys that she would be able to get a ring on it pretty darned quickly.

I WISH I could believe it but I don't . That is my flaw and not a flaw in the writing or the fantasy. No doubt there were hundreds of opportunities with DD personal trainers I've missed due to my cynicism, but that is the price I paid.

One of the best i,ve read!! Thank you. :-)

I thoroughly loved this entire story. Please keep writing. Cookie

I have to say DFWBeast i love your Brownwood stories, that is probably the reason why most are in my favorites,a big fat 5 ***** and congrats for a well written story

5* for all 3 chapters...

You got the emotions of two 'damaged' people, written down, very well.

Thank you..

enjoyed all 3 chapters, thankyou.

@kimi1990 re. ib_says

I think it is more often the case that people who make mostly negative comments need to stay ON their meds. I know there have been times when I should have.

This was a great story with realistic and sympathetic characters. Thank you, Beast!

P.S. I wouldn't be anonymous if I could figure out how to get the email I need to finish setting up my user account. Sigh.

I see you here, making your little snide comments, disrespecting all the stories that a concensus of other readers seem to think are the best written and scored stories around. You never have anything positive to say, just your pretense that you know something about writing or storytelling. You're just another toolbox, so set up in your own conceit that you imagine someone, somewhere, gives a damn what you think.

Stay off the drugs, my dear fellow, or at least comment sober. You'll sound more coherent.

It seems even when apologizing, she comes across as a teasing bitch.

I find it extremely unfair that she is much more focused on Tommy being less insecure, as well as accepting of her exhibitionism, rather than her curbing her tendencies in order to reassure someone she supposedly loves.

She might say that she won't cheat on him, but her vastly toning down her teasing in public, would have been a good way of actually showing him.

It took a long time getting there . But it was worth it . Nice to find characters you can care about . Thank you .

I loved ALL 3!!! Great work!!

Who doesn't love a happy ending? OK, some of the anonymice I suppose, but that's their problem.

Thanks Beast!

One of your best. Made me happy.

Definitely the ending I was hoping for. Five stars for sure.

Excellent story and a great reading time! OK you can complain it was predictable but I don't care it was worth reading. Thank you for a sharing.

Please keep writing and I will keep reading.

I did not want this submission to end I was so captivated by the plot thanks for posting this epic story

Nicely plotted with interesting and loving characters. Angie would drive me nuts with her exhibitionism.

I enjoyed it throughout. The character development was much better than usual in stories like this.

However, that turned out to be a problem. Angel was a self-confessed tramp and couldn't resist flaunting herself to strange men even after they were married-hardly a recipe for a happy future!

I really liked it. And I'm very glad there was a third chapter to confirm the happy ending. But a story named 'Tommy Boy' with a character called 'Tommy Boy' seems incomplete without at least one reference to a 'fat guy in a little coat'!

I have always enjoyed the brownwood series of stories.kudos to you.

Not your best, but good enough. Some scenes and behaviors are more appropriate to high school lovers. I think you overplayed his insecurity due to her good looks, which made it look like he could not fathom or appreciate her ethics and strength of character. I also found his/your preoccupation with looks versus personality and substance a bit juvenile. And no, a mature secure sensitive woman does not flaunt her sexuality, anymore than a confident secure man flaunts his wealth or status. Flaunting is childish and boorish, and indicates a really weak or ignorant character. Why cheapen your wonderful characters with stupid inappropriate manners?

Thanks for your time and effort.

Thank you for a story with complex characters and some real emotional dilemmas. I still think some of Tommy's outbursts were outside the character you defined, the overall story still deserves 5 stars.

Excellentent story. A lot of comedic moments. The only thing that made me cringe was the humongous breasts. I'm sorry but personally that's a turn off to me. I like breasts just like any other man, but not that big. I'm glad she got rid of them.

I love a happy ending. Real life usually doesn't end that way. It's messy and depressing . Brightened my day. 5*

Not many of the beautiful people who enhance their persona give up the beauty they create of themselves. It is not why they "need" enhancement. Very few of the enhanced women I have known had normal children. Seen a bunch of it and one goes with the other. It's might have something do do with playing the cards God deals you. Unhappiness is hereditary. There are no trump cards in unhappyness only drugs, alcohol, and Prozac (different drugs). A good player plays the cards they are dealt. She did not need big titts! Just reality. One does not have to have "The" winning hand when one is a "winner"! Good story!

Sure it might follow the cliche path of the guy who let's himself go, the wife looking for more with the slut friend , the beautiful but insecure woman w a past ,the guy who is insecure...and know what,it doesn't matter, it is a skilled writer who can take a hackneyed plot and with good characters and scenes and dialog,spin it into something that reads as new, nice job. The loving wife is the woman who loves to flaunt it but loves more the man she is with.

I was excited to see part three. I believe some of DFWB's stories are better but this one was very well done as well...probably a 4.5 in my book. I wished Tommy was a bit more of a stronger character but he was down right brutal with his ex? Then again, I can see what DFWB was going for and certainly enjoyed reading the tale. Thanks for the story and am anxious for your next contribution.

"Buckeye Fan"

It has been a long time since a story brought tears to my eyes. Well done.

The most GOOD BTB stories show happy exhusbands with a newer wives or mates and the exhusbands are happier than the cheater exwives ( naturally with cheater husbands the exwives are happier). Very funny some people think to be happier with new woman after divorcing from a cheater women is FETISH STORY! What sort of terminus technicus do the psychiatric handbooks use for this? Do the fetish accusers know the BTB-Consequence story supporters exact fetish type?

It is very interesting the first non religiouse or non heroic literature work was a BTB story in the World. The story was found by the archeologists in Akkadian laguage, but it may be Sumerian origine. The story is "The Poor Man of Nippur".

To enjoy stories where the cheated on or humuliated fellow creatures become more successful than the cheaters and the humuliating bastards according to some people to be "fetish" I tell them thah I proud of this fetish with the unknown immortal author (almost 5000 years old) of "The Poor Man of Nippur".

For me Vulcez "How Are You" BTB story or other BTB stories are the worthy successors of the almost 5000 years old "The Poor Man of Nippur".

This comment was meant for anonymous- just stupid who doesn't seem to understand the word "fetish". Idiot thinks btb stories are fetish. What the ass wipe doesn't seem to understand that most of the shit he prefers should be in fetish.

Fuck off ass wipe. Nobody asked you to read this story. Go back to the slut wife, hot wife, willing cuckold tales you love so much. Good story author, the best and only one worth reading today. The rest was nothing but trash this fucking anon prefers. FIVE STARS

Wow a story where the good guy wins.... I was a very good story THX

The story was complete and you knew where everyone stood. I hope to see many more from you in the future. 5*+ Thank you again

The idea he kept pursuing her when she admitted having a 'friend with benefits,' knowing she was fucking some other guy while Tommy was smitten, left a bad taste for me.

I took a girl out for a while until she admitted she was fucking a neighbor 'for relief' the whole time she was acting like a good girl around me. Once she admitted it, we were sitting at a restaurant, I immediately paid our check, took her home and never called again. I was even falling in love at that point. She called me a few times and seemed hurt when I explained my feelings.

No thank you.

Excellent story, as usual.

The Protagonist was corny though, couldn't really jig wit him.

A damned good story.

Well Mr Beast, you write really well and I'm a sucker for a love story. Grew up in Oak Cliff part of Dallas before moving West. I hope you will share more of your talent with us fans. Yes, you now have another fan.

Best regards,

Santacruzman

Just an over the top good story. I can't imagine giving it anything but a five. This has all the elements of greatness. The characters were insecure, and worked through all that. Tommy Boy was overweight, and worked it off. Erica was a doll. Angie was a person who had some bad judgement calls. She made her mistakes, owned them and determined to make a great life for her and her daughter. She finally made the right choices. Betrayal, love, anxiety, drama and tension, then the big finish.

Sorry, Beast, I have to say this. Randi, you are a great editor. You contribute to this site in so many ways. Thank you. How about a story? Thank you DFWBeast.

For most of the other authors out there - THIS is how you write a great story. Develop the characters, give them flaws, have them logically and realistically work out their issues and give it the Disney ending. It would have been funny for Tommy to let his finger wander maybe one time, but that's the pervert in me. Loved the ending and this whole story.

I went back through all the Brownwood stories and couldn't find what happened. When will we get that story? I really enjoyed this one by the way.

DFWB is getting really good at character development. Great story about two flawed people overcoming. I appreciate and respect BlackRandl's edits and comments, which are an indication concerning the high quality of this writing. Well done.

Thanks for that great "Loving Wives" story!!! And a hint to all authors with pathetic stories: That story has all the essentials for the hall of fame!!!

Story...well told.

Thank you for all your hard work.

Great story, it's nice to see the good guy come out on top and most of all get the girl.

A very entertaining, interesting, and well plotted story.

Thank you DFWBeast. Gave you 4*s.

AMerryman